
Bruh no second chances pleaaaaaasseeeeee
There are so many stories out there where the uke gets back together with the seme just cause he “apologies” or does something like save the ukes life later on. And people class that as character development. Just cause he painstakingly transforms into a fucking decent human being later on, doesn’t mean shit!! It’s the bare minimum (╬ ̄皿 ̄)凸
But honestly, why should the uke get back together with the seme if there are other people (like the second ml) who cared, loved and respected the uke FROM THE BEGINNING!!! Why??? Just cause he’s conventionally attractive?? What does this man have going for him; fucking second rate hisoka looking ass

I hate the seme; I don't think I'll continue reading even tho the art is pretty.
I think I've dropped quite a few stories because I find the semes actions towards the uke to be irredeemable. Ofc I could turn off my brain and continue to read (I've done it before) but I'll forget this story in few weeks anyways so there's no point in me staying onboard.
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-Capitol letters cause carpal tunnel syndrome due to the pinching action of reaching for those keys. Lots of people are aware of this, why aren't you? No one has the right, stupid. Did they make a new amendment to the Bill of Rights? LOL
-I'm fixing your colloquial slang, not wording, as a favor. You don't appreciate it? Your insecurity is the problem, not me.
-My punctuation is just fine.
-You don't need to turn off a brain that's already turned off. 凸
- Use semi-colons sparingly. Put a comma between compound sentences.

Wow you're really into defending this story that it's almost pathetic. I just looked through some of the comments agreeing with my opinion and you seem to have responded to each one with something snarky.
Get a life. Why are you so obsessed with this story and get offended when people have a negative opinion on it?? Not everyone is gonna enjoy it. Period.
I'm not gonna respond to you anymore cause I'll be reading other stories that I actually like. You can continue to reply back but just so you know, you lost this arguement as soon as you decided to "correct" someone's wording over providing a genuine critique. ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍

Ignore them, they are (shockingly), completely wrong xDDDD
https://www.google.com/amp/s/dictionary.cambridge.org/es/amp/ingles/anyways Anyways is correct, by the way. Informal, still correct. Don't waste your time answering someone who likes to give grammar lessons when they don't even know how slang works lol.

You must be a complete idiot. There is no such thing as informal in the English language, douche bag. It's called slang for a reason. Also, dictionaries are there to inform. They give all kinds of information. Go off the internet and get a real dictionary, you idiot, not that it will help you if all you want to do is win an argument. That's not why dictionaries exist. Copy and paste some stupid shit trying to win an argument in order to defend a fellow idiot. You're a joke in every comment you make. You think I haven't argued this point before with better grammarians than you? You can use anyways anywhere except on a resume, in front of a college professor, in front of your boss if they're at all cultured, in a story you're submitting for publication (it will get your work tossed in the slush bin so fast), in front of college educated friends (though its not worth much today), at work, in front of any teachers, in front of anyone intelligent - except someone like you who only thinks they have a brain. Let's see where else...... You're so wrong. Keep going. You're never going to win this against me.

I'm not trying to "win" anything, I'm just giving other people actual information about how slang can be used depending on the register xD Obviously you wouldn't use slang in an academic paper or in front of a professor IF you're in your Uni and they're expecting a less colloquial jargon, but it does not mean that using slang in everyday conversations is a bad thing? Honestly, would you like me to act all high and mighty, given that you are obviously American (my dear Bill of Rights, college mate) and saying that you should only talk RP? Because that would be stupid. You're a joke, and you're just trying to stir up more and more people, this time by being a classist, next time who knows what. So much for the freedom of speech and expression you claim to advocate in your homepage. You can have this comment section and this conversation if you're so thirsty for a win, mate. God knows what your real life must be like, if this is the only thing that gives you pleasure. But eh, what to expect from a classist.

wtf? You really don't know what freedom of speech is? You seem to have it all mixed the hell up with wanting free speech to mean that someone doesn't have the right to "stir up more and more people," or not having a right to say whatever you want no matter how much of a nazi you are. ahem.
That's not it. Freedom of speech means YOU CAN say whatever you want no matter how big a nazi you are. talk about a joke
Thank you for picking this up new uploader(≧∀≦)