Vanessa90

Beautiful, breathtaking, superb!!!

One of the bad parts of this work is that the author make us really hate one of the MC. The author made him such a scummy person cuz it's impossible to forgive him. That's really bad in this kind of story, that's suppose to have a happy and fulfilling ending. It's ok to make the MCs to have flaws but making one of them so despicable and the other so powerless and even dumb, makes us all to really hate the mc from the beginning; a hate that's not gonna calm down even after hearing their"reasons" or backstory. That's a big mistake with this kind of story that's suppose to be enjoyable. Cuz it's not suppose to be a drama, but all that rape and injustice and helplessness make the reader really hate the story and the MC. It's a shame cuz it's a lot of work.