This is honestly far from good.
I feel like it hides it’s terrible, repetitive plot behind poetic ass words every single chapter; but they’re all filler. They keep talking, talking, talking, THAT’S ALL THEY DO, in this poetic ahh way so you’ll think "oh this is so bittersweet poor them I feel so bad [insert broken heart emoji]"
It was actually interesting at first, it could’ve kept being, but it doesn’t because the author puts so much effort on the writing of those wannabe poetic monologues instead of the actual storyline in the long run.
You don’t root for Yoosung at all, despite all his Shakespeare ass monologue (sorry author), because the solution to his issues is right there: MAKING A CHOICE.
1- running away for good and starting his live anew with Woojoo,
2- accepting reality isn’t so kind and accepts his grandfather’s wishes by giving his money to some dominant alpha they chose for him and done.
The plot needs to stop being dragged on under the promise that "Yoosung wants his grandfather to die first", because either way he’ll run away from the house and people will try to stop him from doing so. If he’s going to run away no matter what, what exactly is the point of waiting for his grandfather to die? What is it gonna bring? How will it be of any use?
As much as Yoosung’s situation isn’t easy and he’s suffering too, he’s dragging Woojoo into his suffering by making him wait for him for TEN YEARS, during all of them he knew Woojoo liked him, yet he had no issue making him watch him fuck or almost fuck other alphas and use him only whenever when he felt like it.
No matter what Yoosung is going through, I’ll keep believing Woojoo deserves better, or that at least they’re not suited for each other at all. It’s not normal of Woojoo to stay in love with someone who has been treating you so badly for ten years too. It’s obsession. They need to let each other go but I bet the author is gonna brush that off with some more shakespearesque ahh monologues
« I used to be NORMAL in 10th grade » ????? Am I the only one who actually couldn’t get past that shit
This actually cannot be serious. Like a few years back before this story went on break I had NO hope whatsoever because of the childhood friends and first love trope, but then this season started like 3 whole years later and Jooin’s relationship with Cain was like a fucking MIRACLE to me. The way he made Yahwi shut up in the last chapter was fucking insane and I was SO proud, because usually in those kind of stories it’s "first come, first served". One of the MLs can be one of the worst people on earth, an utter piece of shit, the biggest scum the world will ever know; if he was introduced first (bonus if he has black hair, bonus childhood trope), he’s the fucking endgame. I couldn’t stand this shit anymore. All the drama was unnecessary but the author made us HATE Yahwi not only through his behavior but through the comparison with how Cain acts with Jooin, with how sweet he is, with how much he showers him with love, they’re literally complete opposites. THEY GAVE ME HOPE WITH THOSE LAST FEW CHAPTERS.
All that for WHAT ? For the childhood trope to get brung up again and be Yahwi’s way out of facing consequences?
I am actually so glad I’m reading this shit illegally because if Jooin doesn’t end up with Cain then this is, and I actually mean it, one of the worst stories I’ve ever read. Being such a bad author should be forbidden. Never fucking pick up a pen again