This actually cannot be serious. Like a few years back before this story went on break I had NO hope whatsoever because of the childhood friends and first love trope, but then this season started like 3 whole years later and Jooin’s relationship with Cain was like a fucking MIRACLE to me. The way he made Yahwi shut up in the last chapter was fucking insane and I was SO proud, because usually in those kind of stories it’s "first come, first served". One of the MLs can be one of the worst people on earth, an utter piece of shit, the biggest scum the world will ever know; if he was introduced first (bonus if he has black hair, bonus childhood trope), he’s the fucking endgame. I couldn’t stand this shit anymore. All the drama was unnecessary but the author made us HATE Yahwi not only through his behavior but through the comparison with how Cain acts with Jooin, with how sweet he is, with how much he showers him with love, they’re literally complete opposites. THEY GAVE ME HOPE WITH THOSE LAST FEW CHAPTERS.
All that for WHAT ? For the childhood trope to get brung up again and be Yahwi’s way out of facing consequences?
I am actually so glad I’m reading this shit illegally because if Jooin doesn’t end up with Cain then this is, and I actually mean it, one of the worst stories I’ve ever read. Being such a bad author should be forbidden. Never fucking pick up a pen again
This is exactly how I feel. Like I’m on mangago because I can’t afford paying for this stuff as a poor student, but thanks to this website I’ve actually came across some amazing stories that made me go out of my way and support the author, pay for chapters I’ve already read, just because I appreciate their work so much. In this case I’m so glad I never had to spend a single penny on this shit ass. Being such an horrendous author should be actually be considered a crime 5 years have been stolen from my life reading this crap
This is going on a such boring route.
Daniel isn’t interesting at all. He’s a very basic character and the romance between him and the FL feels SO unnatural. Eugene and Cain have been worried about Litia and taking such great care of her for so long- and now we’re throwing away all the development between them and replace them with Daniel ?
If Daniel is the ML I’m definitely dropping. I was honestly hoping for a fair reverse harem where all the love interests would have their chance and we’re getting none of that. Logia spent like a few days with Daniel and already fell in love with him and isn’t scared of him threatening her life when in the OG Novel it was said he had no problems killing anyone ?
She got dumb. I had already thought so and she started running after Daniel and wanting to be around him only cuz he’s « hot » when her life has been in obvious danger and her goal until now (correct me if I’m wrong) was supposed to SURVIVE. But yeah, watch her run after one the most dangerous characters of the novel! She doesn’t make sense.
It was so promising </3
I’m really grateful for whoever translated and updated chapitres 111 and 112, but please keep in mind that we all prefer quality over quantity- you provided 2 chapters really fast, but we don’t understand a single thing. I re read both chapters multiple times and I still can’t understand what they’re talking about- and not understanding those chapters makes us unable to understands the OTHER following chapters, even if they’re well translated (in this case, chapter 113).
I hope you understand, please don’t hesitate to take more time to translate this properly <3 thank you
Hear me out.
Yona x Yuri.
So far, it’s pretty obvious who Melissa is going to end up with. She’s head over heels for Nine and so is he.
Now! Yuri obviously has developed a trauma around men. She has been forced to be in the palm of crazy and disgusting bastard for thousands of years because it was her « role », and now she’s going to lose the sole person she’s ever loved, a WOMAN, to a man. It’s only going to make her feel even more hatred towards men.
And now!
Yona.
Putting Melissa aside, it seems like Yuri and Yona have a great relationship (Yona feeling comfortable enough to call Yuri only by name despite Yuri being a noble is enough proof), and is most likely the only person Yuri feels close to (even if, for now, they’re close because Yuri wants to know how Melissa is doing). But once Yuri will have to give up on Melissa, I truly don’t think she’ll just stop talking to Yona. If anything, I think it’s going to be the exact opposite. Yona will comfort Yuri, and they might get even closer…..
Or at least, that’s how I see it.
This couple has great potential, but overall I really hope Yuri won’t end up with a man :(( she’s a lesbian queen
Considering dropping-
The story doesn’t make much sense. Why did Arsene propose to her instead of killing her right away like he did in the book when she didn’t act ANY different than she did in the book? If he’s the villain, why did he and Regina’s bestF go out and why did he kill himself for her out of love ? Why is he in love with Regina already????
Talking about Regina, she’s quite annoying. I mean, I get that she’s mad worried and scared for her life, but sometimes I think it’s too much.
It’s not the fact that she’s not as powerful and courageous as other FLs like Your Throne’s, Remarried Impress’ ect. It’s just that she has NO strength for herself. She can’t do anything alone.
It’s not bad to rely on others, but that’s the only thing she can do.
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UPDATE
PLEASE HER STRENGHT IS TO LITERALLY RESURRECT HERSELF ????
This story makes no sense I’m crying in my bed what the fuck
About the rest I can’t say much because I’m confused as well lmao
But she did act different from the book.
Regina in the book apparently tried to blackmail Arsene after seeing the murder, that’s why he killed her apparently?
After FL isekai-d and saw the same murder she instead denied seeing it in every chance (even though ML knows she saw it) and even tried to create an alibi that she saw him buying jewelry that day so it couldn’t have been him.
Anyway this is what I remember, I might be wrong about something or other
I feel you but about why he proposed instead of killed her might be why because unlike in the OG story, she didn’t try to blackmail him but instead helped him establish an alibi so he might think that she values her life enough to not do anything that stupid and she’s good enough to help him with his goals through marriage.
Also, about her personal strength: what’s the she a highscholer when she was isekaid? It’s obvious she wouldn’t have any skills or experiences so she’d act more like a child at times or at least more immature (especially when she’s fearing for her life)
Btw I’m not trying to get you to not drop or convince you that you’re wrong. In fact, please drop the story if you don’t like it. I’m just pointing out possible explanations for the points mentioned in your comment. I kinda do agree that I can’t see where this is heading either, especially with the random appearance of magic powers and such. I might also drop temporarily and then binge to see if it gets better.
I don’t think you get my point.
Before all, thank you for reminding me that she was in highschool!!! I had totally forgotten about that.
But it doesn’t really change my POV.
I’m not saying she *can’t* be scared for her life. I’m saying that she should, at least, have her own strength that makes her special and, at least, different and noticeable. Do you know that blonde girl in « Your Throne »? She’s a bit like Regina. She’s scared for her life, has no physical strength, can’t do much alone; but her determination and her capacity to understand things fast ARE her OWN strengths and make her special and powerful in her own way.
Our FL has nothing of the sort. She only knows on how to rely on others and actually doesn’t *try* to save herself from the situations she is in, putting aside those where her truly in danger.
Tbh I’m still confused about the falling in love part. I personally don’t like it cause there’s no real reason to fall for her yet so I’m hoping it’s more interest (if that) than him falling for her. Ik from what we’ve seen in the story he’s likely already in live (him defending from the emperor, saving her, etc) but I don’t like it either.
I really want more backstory into him before he actually falls in love cause this feels flat and rushed.
I don’t think I explained myself well earlier. I’m just gonna write it like this, she’s living a completely normal life (from what we know in her og life, she probably had a normal life and family), things like murder or her life being endangered would never be something she was exposed to. It’s clear she obviously doesn’t know how to deal with anything and has no inner strength add to the fact that she probably has to get used to the whole nobility life as well.
Ab the your throne comparison, I feel like it’s not fair cause the blonde girl was to a certain extent used to that world and that life so she had more reason to get her bearings on straight and stand up for herself (especially considering the amount of hardships she had faced which made her be stronger). In contrast this FL has absolutely nothing like that which might be why she’s reacting like this.
Idk I might be giving the author too much credit and she’s really that one dimensional but I think that to a certain extent her actions are justified. At the same time, I do understand your point and i want her to develop some confidence in herself. She is supposedly planning on running away tho (even though she’ll probably not go through with it) so something. Interesting might happen.
This is honestly far from good.
I feel like it hides it’s terrible, repetitive plot behind poetic ass words every single chapter; but they’re all filler. They keep talking, talking, talking, THAT’S ALL THEY DO, in this poetic ahh way so you’ll think "oh this is so bittersweet poor them I feel so bad [insert broken heart emoji]"
It was actually interesting at first, it could’ve kept being, but it doesn’t because the author puts so much effort on the writing of those wannabe poetic monologues instead of the actual storyline in the long run.
You don’t root for Yoosung at all, despite all his Shakespeare ass monologue (sorry author), because the solution to his issues is right there: MAKING A CHOICE.
1- running away for good and starting his live anew with Woojoo,
2- accepting reality isn’t so kind and accepts his grandfather’s wishes by giving his money to some dominant alpha they chose for him and done.
The plot needs to stop being dragged on under the promise that "Yoosung wants his grandfather to die first", because either way he’ll run away from the house and people will try to stop him from doing so. If he’s going to run away no matter what, what exactly is the point of waiting for his grandfather to die? What is it gonna bring? How will it be of any use?
As much as Yoosung’s situation isn’t easy and he’s suffering too, he’s dragging Woojoo into his suffering by making him wait for him for TEN YEARS, during all of them he knew Woojoo liked him, yet he had no issue making him watch him fuck or almost fuck other alphas and use him only whenever when he felt like it.
No matter what Yoosung is going through, I’ll keep believing Woojoo deserves better, or that at least they’re not suited for each other at all. It’s not normal of Woojoo to stay in love with someone who has been treating you so badly for ten years too. It’s obsession. They need to let each other go but I bet the author is gonna brush that off with some more shakespearesque ahh monologues