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Manhuas are really getting better abd better with pacing these days but it still makes you want to slap the author back and forth and yell:
I know you're single, you don't have experience with kids, and you're living alone BUT A 3 YRS OLD WITH SOFT BONES CAN WIELD SWORDS, JUMP AROUND AND KILL MONSTERS?! MY NIECES AND NEPHEWS AT THAT AGE COULDN'T EVEN RUN AROUND WITHOUT TRIPPING! And now a 3 yr old is having romance and lifting girls?
You're making this really this really hard for readers to relate to! MAKE SOMETHING THAT ACTUALLY MAKE SENSE! Like where are u putting ur sword that pop out of nowhere when ur dealing with griffin?! DRAW IT, MAKE CHARACTERS WITH ACTUAL INTELLIGENCE!