He’s hot as hell for sure but unhealthy obsessed with this poor girl. And why would he after realizing she’s a virgin, start thrusting harder? Is this supposed to show that he’s overwhelmed with passion that she never had another man before? Again, selfish as hell of him and doesn’t consider her feelings at all. Damn, reminds me how difficult it was at the start of my first time to adjust. At least I had a very considerate and experienced lover so it was an amazing experience. What this sultan is doing is rape, plain and simple. Ugh. Still amazing art so I will continue to read.
Which Sultan? The old guy who almost raped her in chapter 1 or the ninth prince, who was told by Saye to put “it” in who never said she was a virgin and the prince who hasn’t explained why he’s thrusting faster, Sultan? And yeah he’s a little to obsessed.
Then again I’m unfortunately dropping this because of the obsessiveness so I probably missed some details
No I’m talking about his son, the ninth prince, who with his successful rebellion affectively became the new sultan. And yeah, he’s so obsessed that it’s not sexy anymore imo. She tells him that it hurts, which should have clued him in to be more careful, even if she wasn’t a virgin. What a douche nozzle. Why would you think I was referring to that old geezer at being hot ?(￣∇￣").
Lol. I can’t fault you for that. The art is gorgeous but the characters seem a little shallow and one dimensional. What a shame
It’s a crying shame that this isn’t smut with such beautiful and sexy Art!!!
MY THOUGHTS EXACTLY!!!! IT WOULD HAVE BEEN SO DAMN HOT
I don’t get the narrative trying to present Mr. Han as being a bad guy. He has a lot of sex with different guys. So what? He’s a single man. Also the MC being hurt after Mr Han made a move on him, doesn’t make too much sense with the reason he’s hurt for. He internally accuses this guy for knowing that MC liked him all the time and toying with him. Huh? I didn’t get that at all. That guy dropped hints the whole time that he was open to MC and made his move only after he’s seen him in a gay bar. How did MC come to such a weird conclusion? Did he ever consider that Mr Han didn’t know MC was gay and him being his boss stopped him all this time to make an obvious move on him? It’s also funny how MC‘s friend doesn’t want Mr Han to get close to OP because of his reputation. I get that but she had no problem with rooting for the other guy who she knows actually nothing about. Even brought him along to visit MC. How does she know that the red head is not just as open with his body as Mr Han? He could be, for all she knows, also enjoying his single life full heartedly. Lol. If we really compare Mr Han and the red head, the latter blackmailed MC into being sexually molested by him, while Mr Han acts like a discrete gentleman. Of course MC enjoys all that and I wouldn’t be surprised if it later comes out that Mr Han is really an utter scumbag, but the Lack of evidence of such (as of yet), doesn’t really support all the characters going on about how they don’t like him and how there is something wrong with him. And I still want to see a threesome. And one with everyone enjoying each other. What I mean. I want some Mr Han/redhead actionლ(´ڡ`ლ)
i completely agree! i feel like mr.han hasn’t done anything yet to make me dislike or distrust his character as the author is obviously trying to make us do. i kinda like him more than hwi at this point.
In reference to her friend, she said Han tends to get lots of lovers and leave them behind. Which she is worried he would do with Parma. The narrative is not that he is a awful guy, but he probably tends to view guys as more of a revolving door. Nothing wrong with that, unless you’re serious.
His* friend.
I fully understand that, and I get that she’s trying to protect her friend but if she’s so protective why would she try to push her friend to get together with a man she literally doesn’t know. That doesn’t make too much sense.
I think that’s because he came really quickly when she called him that (through Param’s phone) night where he was drugged. So he looks like a dependable and responsible man to her.
Yep. It’s such an obvious ploy of the author and I think she’s planting all the distrust and dislike for Mr Han too early, when his actions don’t really support such dislike/distrust yet. He has a big sexual appetite, and I suppose him breaking it off with his purely sexual partner in that one chapter is supposed to show that he doesn’t care for people. I’m sorry but if I’m not into my sex partner anymore and I’m interested in someone else, I’d break it off as well. I think it’s rather honest and mature of him to break it off before pursuing MC fully after finding out he could have a chance. He also seems romantically interested in the MC. At least I didn’t see any evidence to the contrary as it rather seems to point in the other direction that Mr Han likes MC romantically as well as sexually. And I would understand the friend’s reasoning better if it wasn’t just Mr Han she’s against getting together with MC, but would also show concern about this other guy she doesn’t know at all, instead of bringing him over to MC‘s apartment and such. I wonder how she would react if MC would tell her how they got to know each other. Would she still be all for the red head as long as it’s not Mr Han? When we get down to it, the red head did worse things to the MC and acts like an immature kid. Its a sexy story and MC falls for red head (because he falls for MC) and it’s all cute but if the characters are all up in arms over Mr Han for being evidently promiscuous (which seems to be his greatest „sin“ as of now), then why is no one giving the red head at least half as much flack for how he blackmailed the MC into being sexually compliant? The thing is, the build up to Mr Han being the wrong one for the MC with how the characters react to him, while purely trusting MC‘s red headed love interest, seems wonky at best. The author failed to portray him in the negative light any other character sees him as. That’s the problem I have with the story right now. So what is this building up to? MC choosing Mr Han for a moment and then, surprise surprise, realizing he’s only in it for the sex after all? That wouldn’t really be a twist here as all the characters already dislike him. It would be more interesting if Mr Han is actually a normal grown man who likes the MC as more than a bed partner, and that everybody judged him prematurely for his past. And maybe MC realizing that the only reason he reacted internally negatively to Mr Han coming onto him (all this „he played with me because he knew I liked him before), which is ridiculous, was just MC already falling for the red head and subconsciously closing himself off to Mr Han emotionally. That would be an interesting „twist“. It would be an interesting moral to the readers as well. That you shouldn’t judge people by how other people talk about them but by what they actually do, and to pay attention to it. But that will obviously not happen ╮(￣▽￣)╭
I agree. Makes total sense to me and I would have reacted the same if my best friend was into a guy, who I always saw was picking new people up. I get it if my best friend wanted to sleep with him and that’s it but a huge crush like Param has? No way. I know he would be crushed so I would also react the same way as the friend did here. In terms of Hwi, some people can pick up characters and he looks trustworthy to her.
Lol. Sorry for this long ramble but I have to say it. What bothers me also about the whole Friend and Mr Han situation is that MC is treated like some naive young summer child instead of as the grown ass man that he is who has a successful career. I understand the friend warning him about Mr Han‘s reputation. That’s fine, but she goes on and on about how she doesn’t like him to MC before anything ever happened between them as far as she knows. What makes her think MC wouldn’t be able to make his own decisions? Also, in all those chapters, I wonder why MC was never concerned about the elephant in the room regarding Mr Han. Wouldn’t be the most pressing concern that keeps the MC from really attaching himself that if the relationship goes awry, he could loose his job or it would make his job more difficult? I don’t remember MC ever thinking about that. And that’s beside him having an affair with the red head. I don’t know but MC is like a leaf in the Wind. Never saying what he really wants, going with the flow whenever the guys are putting the moves on him. Tbh I don’t get why no one is a little miffed with the MC banging the red head while also getting friskier with his boss, and not telling Mr Han that he’s in a sexual relationship already. The MC is indecisive and makes it look like he’s playing around.
Yes, plus Param is a little lost and inexperienced. I think things are happening so fast. We just have to wait and see. But I am glued to this webtoon ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
Yeah that’s probably it. It’s just bothersome to see her to go on and on about an adults sex life and how she doesn’t like him because of what she heard through gossip. It’s good that she told MC about what she knows about Mr Han’s reputation. But once would have sufficed. She seems to personally dislike this man over rumors how guys get addicted to sex with him. I think because we as the readers see more of what’s going on with the characters than each of those characters know about each other, we get a more unbiased view. That’s why it’s a little frustrating to see her basically judge a stranger purely for (what she heard through the grapevine) his sex life, while we actually see him acting better than Hwi a lot of times. I think in the end we will probably be made aware of that Mr Han is just playing around but I don’t see much evidence of that yet.
It’s good that she told MC of Mr Han‘s reputation to make him aware of this. But MC is also a Full fledged adult with a successful career, so she should trust that he can make his own decisions without her continued input about the same topic. It gets annoying quickly if a friend always goes on and on about how and why they don’t like someone you are into, like you didn’t get it the first time. It’s rather condescending.
I mean based on the raws, Han gets a whole backstory and is more humanized. So I don’t think this will go the usual route of he is just an asshole. I do think Han likes Param, but I also think he kind of sees it as a game as well. He is not made out to be awful, I think the friend just represents our friends and how protective they get, etc.
And Hwi (redhead) doesn’t like Han because he is a threat. The redhead wants the main character.
I didn’t check out the raws yet and it’s Good to know that Mr Han will be more fleshed out. And I’m glad it won’t go the predictable route of him being utter scum just because other people see him as such in the story while we don’t get much evidence of this. Lol. In any other story he would have been the main guy. The friend just rubbed me the wrong way, not because she warns MC about his reputation but because she lets him know all the time that she doesn’t like him because of all the rumors she heard about Han. It’s a little overdone aside from MC distrusting Han solely because he comes to the conclusion that his boss toyed with his feelings after coming onto him openly for the first time. That thought process doesn’t make too much sense to me. And that just looked like the author wanting to shift the narrative too forcefully in Hwi‘s favor. I like Hwi‘s development but he didn’t prove himself to be a much better guy than Han, yet.
Oh lol. I totally understand why Hwi doesn’t like Han because he’s his love rival. I used red head because I totally forgot his name ┗( T﹏T )┛
Param was hurt because Mr. Han knew about his crush the entire time and played with him. Parma’s friend knows Param more serious and inexperienced and it’s totally fair of her to warn him about Mr. Han. Which she’s only done twice. It’s one thing to have a lot of sex, but apparently Mr. Han also hurts the people he goes out with.
Mr. Han broke it off with his fling right after sex, right after he almost smothered him with a pillow so he could imagine he was fucking someone else. And Mr. Han came inside him which his fling obviously did not want. He’s gross.
I agree it was certainly messed up of Han to treat his sex partner like that. It is bad form to actually break up right after you’ve done the deed. But honestly it’s not worse than Hwi blackmailing Param into a sexual relationship. Which, as bl tropes demand, turns into a consensual sexual relationship. About how Han knew that Param had a crush on him. I don’t see it that way. He is interested in him and dropped hints that he’s into him. But also remained careful as he couldn’t know for sure that Param is gay. Han is also his employer so of course he wouldn’t just directly come on to him without knowing if he’s gay. He only went directly after him when he’s seen him in that gay bar and rescued him from being raped in the stall. Unless we get a flashback of Han thinking about how he knew way before that Param had a crush on him, I don’t want to assume what’s not there. And even if he knew. Why is him low key flirting with the guy he’s into such an atrocity when Hwi actually sexually assaulted Param and forced him to do things he wasn’t prepared to do? That’s my whole problem. When I put Han and Hwi on the „you are gross dude scale“ they are not far apart from each other. And from what we’ve actually seen, Hwi acted worse than Han (yet). Hwi only gets all that slack because he’s the main love interest and we can see him developing feelings for Param, while Han remains mysterious in character and intentions.
I didn’t read it yet but I have to say this. It’s amusing to me that this is called „Demon Breeder“ which is rather lascivious, yet it’s tagged as only shonen ai. With a title like that I’d expect usually smut ლ(´ڡ`ლ)
I understand that he doesn’t want to tell Mirae that he’s in love with him because it could destroy their relationship. But the lie he told him would make any person angry and break off the friendship anyways. No one wants to be used as a distraction. Honestly this was really dumb and hamfisted just to create some tension that turns sexual and rapey out of nowhere. That was a really cheap move by the author. And how Mirae acted the whole time, it would have made more sense for him to leave and distance himself after hearing that, not to start sexually harassing the MC. Which was only put there as fan service. MC is also Full of contradiction here. He lies that he loves the other guy so Mirae won’t be disgusted by him, thinking to late that if Mirae was actually a homophobe, he would feel disgusted anyways just for him coming out. So why not just tell him that he’s in love with him? Mirae starts to pounce on him, talking some stuff about being a replacement and MC is of course shocked. But it’s also weird for him to say to the guy he actually loves, that just because he likes the other guy doesn’t mean he would just have sex with anyone. Ok, yes, but Mirae is not just anyone to him. The guy you have a crush on bounces on you, and instead of immediately telling him you lied and that you love him you say something to make him stop and possibly leave. This is mixed up as hell. Doesn’t it become obvious that Mirae wants him as soon as he’s being pounced on? Why still deny the truth at that moment? ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
Just realized this is the same author for “a fine line”, with the biggest asshole seme ever. I’m scared now.
It is so much worse than A Fine Line...
Well technically Ana is the author of 'a fine line', Kimsu is the artist.
Though honestly, both of them have a pretty similar taste for drama for their each individual works.
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Σ( ￣□￣||) I’m scared to ask how this could be worse than “fine line”. Was it a gang bang after all?
All four of them are shady manchildren who can't be really honest and communicative.
This flashback seems to insinuate that their friendship fell apart due to the MC being discovered as an omega. So why in the world would you reunite with them at all? I suspect the father is that quiet dark haired asshole who looks down on MC. So far no one is likable. And whoever the father is... you had unprotected sex with an omega in heat and didn’t think this could result in pregnancy? And no word for 10 weeks? Whoever the father is, is an asshole. I’m just guessing here but will the next chapters have the omega meeting up with each alpha to find out who he had sex with that night? MC being embarrassed can’t just come out with “I’m pregnant, did you have sex with me that night?”. It’s not really an easy question to ask if you have a pick between 4 guys here. Whoever it was should just come out and say it was him.
I get that not every artist is comfortable with drawing sex scenes but.... why choose the topic of the omega verse (which indicates that there will be sex, as it’s part of this whole trope) and then just opt out into fade outs with the reader being left confused as to what actually happened, if you feel so uncomfortable about it? It feels like part of the story is missing. Furthermore, this story seems choppy and confusing. There is also no world building. I have no clue what’s going on in either of the protagonists life. ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
Lol. I know many people love him with Tia but honestly, seems boring even though he’s mentally the healthiest out of the guys. He’s really kind of just there. He doesn’t really have an impact on the story and not on Tia, who’s still crying after the weed. I mean, he saves her and such but it’s always glossed over. Sorry but I’ve never been fond of the super loyal guard dog kind of love interest as such a character only seems to exist to protect and pine after the MC hopelessly. It’s only interesting if they show that there is more to them. Carsein is great, don’t get me wrong but he’s not that interesting. Also, Ruve is a weak male lead and the weed an obsessed fool. Tia really doesn’t have the best picks here. So after all, Carsein would be the safest choice. In real life, I’d rather choose him (⌒▽⌒)
I would like for once to read a „seme cheating“ story where the uke isn’t a weak willed, no self esteem having fool, that caves in as soon as the seme gets sick. Lol. And why is it always a stress induced ulcer in those stories? Wouldn’t a STD make more sense. I’m sorry but it doesn’t make too much sense for a guy who sleeps around freely, not caring if he hurts any feelings that could develop, to suddenly feel so stressed out that one of his lovers left him, to develop a Stress ulcer. And it’s not like he treated the uke that special. What was funny is how the seme declared he never brings women over for sex, making the uke feel all special, but in the next chapter he threw the uke out to have sex with one of his lovers. Lol what was even more comical was the cousin begging the uke to visit that douche bag in the hospital because he feels so bad and missed him, and as soon as uke gets there the seme is just about to put his dick in yet another woman. Lol. And his claims of „she came on to me“ are just pathetic. Especially with the image of him grinning like a horny dog with his hand on her waist. The only way I can tolerate a uke getting back together with a cheating seme is if the uke cuts that bastard down verbally and breaks up as soon as the cheating is discovered. The uke should reject that prick over and over and become emotionally indifferent. The seme should suffer like hell and make a fool out of himself. Some soul searching is required as well.
A story like that being created is straight up Impossible but like we never know