the best story's are always 5.5 chapters long.
Now it's 5.6(๑•ㅂ•)و✧
im pulling this right out of my ass but i think purple hairs little sister is one of aimu's old friends. just a guess though ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Hope it is so he can reunite with the ppl that loved him the way he was
yeah :)
i kind of ship jan with pray (the lion hugo). like its hot but i enjoy jamil a lot more with jan then jan with pray.
still could deal with both and love how it turns out :3
the story had lots of little bits left out. it felt as if it was missing a lot of important information and that made the story quite confusing at parts. (also please check the end)
the ending comes off as if it'll continue on but i think we all deserve a sequel or a Q n' A (not sure if there is one). Like whats the background of jimmy? and why doesn't he like his dad? also why did his parents send people to "stalk" him?; how did Ethan meet the original friends who went to his house sometimes as kids? does Ethan still need to take medication for his trauma? ( i still have more questions )
(i'm about to ramble on about what we need to know more about the characters)
i feel as if the characters in this story got a bit rushed so i got confused a lot.
What did Faye really have to do with the story? i know she was a cousin (?) of Ethan back when he was younger, but she doesn't really have many connections to do with the story.
i think the author should explain more about Dan and harry and a few other as well; to me they came off as side characters without a background of sorts.
Also during the story it was said blue had a younger brother (?) but apparently he died or something, i think we need more detail to blue and his family since they play an important part in Ethan's life.
Also what about George and his wife? i know that they where somewhat an important part of jimmy's life but they really didn't seem to stand any purpose for a lot of the story, they where just there so that jimmy could have a friendship or at least it seemed like that.
i still can say tonnes more about the whole story but in the end i really enjoyed it.
i think the problem was that, for example, if i had a huge full lot (that was all information) and and it had lots of grass (interesting and good story) but my pet dog (to much work) decided to dig a lot of holes ( empty spaces that need grass* and lot*).
so basically the story for great it had lots of information and interesting and good story, but it was big so it was a lot of work to take care of and it led to places in the story in which where empty and needed more information and good and interesting story.
sorry for rambling on i'm just quite into the topic ლ(´ڡ`ლ) dm me
omg omg omg i just realized im an idiot i know everyone is saying shes actually a guy, but i just realized who she/he was, read down to find out what i think
Its totally the guy that "died" i forgot his name but the hairs the same color, and he doesn't get his period.
now ive come to the hypothesis that shes the guy that changed schools because of his bullying at previous school
That’s what I thought at first but the guy was taller than M.C. and now this other person is shorter. Or maybe it’s just me.
yeah i guess, maybe its like a little brother/sister
but it could've been something ffreaky that the guy did to mess up his body.
There better be story with byul, istg there better be, you can't end it off in a few chapters without seeing how byul grows up
i liked it. having the whole sports theme.
nice oneshot but i wish i could see the match haha