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This story is just all over the place. Is it just me or would anyone who got used and rejected by a former lover could even stand being in one place, let alone in close proximity with each other? I know its not my place to dictate what the author does with their story but I would rather Ariadne to focus on her revenge against her family than all this romance. I am still upset that Arabella died like that and how it was used for romantic purpose in the end. Who the hell was that white guy riding their carriage before?? Who on earth was that grandma in the boat and why is she seeing the FL in some water? What the hell is the Judge in the first place? Nothing was explained about the circumstances of her return in the past. Not even the “consequence” was explained all too well. All the romantic scenes are too cringy bc it feels forced. And now we have the camelia boy who most likely fell in love w Ariadne and is going to have a second ML syndrome. Or is it a third? Who knows at this point. Ariadne is not even making steps of trying to become queen asap except for romancing the prince? She knows who would kill the Queen and it could be her chance to help Alphonso to secure his throne if he take out the red haired douche canoe. I apologize for the rant if you end up reading this, but i just dont know where this thing is going aside from a harem type romance