Didn't read this juat came here to say this looks like final fantasy xiv oc dj
Can you give a like to it, please?
This is like Suicide Boy but cranked up to 100000000000000
I didn't know this was possible but here we are
Wow almost like they shouldn't have let her know her brother was here, like she wouldn't try to save him. Real smart of you guys
Starting this (and reading the author's other work...) I thought this was really fucked up.
Now after finishing I just think it's weird. Like at some point it got so much its lost its spice. It started out really well too...
Like what the hell was even happening? It feels like the author just completely gave up somewhere mid story (I think the point was when the whole hospital plot started, afther that it just went completely down hill) and just wrote whatever was going on in their head. Like the author thought 'oh, wouldn't it be cool if he suddenly acted like a dog' and 'wouldn't it be cool if now he also had a split personality' but than the MC hated him again so oh no, how do we fix it? Just cut his legs off, yes, that would work! it just came out of nowhere.
The amount of time I felt like banging my head against a wall...
Ok I need to know is the main romance here pedophilia?
it’s not. the story starts when the seme is a young child and the uke is a teenager, but then there’s a time skip of 10 years
Not really
Ok so the more I read this the more I started to hate Jasper. Like everything seems to revolve around him. Everyone includeding the story treated him like a small precious little bean who's just sooo good and could do nothing wrong buuut everyone's so mean to him for no reason!!! Yeah, like that.
And for all his goodness and supposed selflessness, who's only doing good to receive bad, he's also, like, seem to only think of himself? I can't believe I'm saying this, but I kinda agree with William, Jasper just feels fake as fuck. I had a bad feeling about him from before that, but the moment that really hit me with it is when he just read his crush's diary, and found out he was depressed and tried to fucking kill himself and all he could think was about himself?? And how that made him feel?? Like bro.
Also yeah that ending is just not an ending, nothing got actually resolved it was really bad overall
I... Think you might wanna read this again in a few years and with a lessen hatred for Jasper.
Can't believe i found a "william" here...
That was pretty slick