Its good ig but MC kinda irritates me ngl, he could discreetly use strengthening magic (if that’s a thing in this one) or show his ring (he still works for a ‘noble’ yk) Also he doesn’t HAVE to work for the lord dude, based on previous reactions wtf could the lord do if he decided to leave or rebel? Plus this duel idea is so stupid i cannot believe they agreed to it my god
I looooove this story, but like my only criticism about Arhad is that he doesn’t see Ianna as Ianna, he sees her as Roberstein (or at least he desires her because she was Roberstein). Idk if that makes sense but Ianna needs the distinction and stresses it a lot, so it makes me so... graaaah ya kno? ヽ(`Д´)ノ
Ngl, first chapter was the HOTTEST imo (≧∀≦)
facts. some people may say it was too fast paced but i think it all flowed rlly well ლ(´ڡ`ლ)