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I kinda like the girls in this story; they don't get in the way of the story telling and are strong -> flame girl at least is.
I also went on reddit and saw that the Mc doesn't technically end up with any of them, technically. I hope they edit this version so that the time travel ending bs where the girls go back to be with him doesn't happen but I'm not mad about it. Seems like he didn't end up falling in love ╮(￣▽￣)╭