MC is unreasonably stupid in some regards and that’s used as fuel to move the plot forward which is such lazy writing I hate it everytime I see it. Well it’s quite a basic webtoon, nothing new and everything is predictable. If I were her I wouldn’t be trusting a soul bruh she needs to wake the heck up due yesterday
She hasn’t trusted anyone. Are we reading the same story? Plus how do you expect her to do anything to change what happened if she doesn’t have anyone to help her. Did we not see how she struggled to even do BASIC shi because of her past actions. She’s watched like a hawk
Her personality is literally too optimistic and happy merry go. I like her but she’s given the typical female mc treatment and yes she is def too trusting of this friend despite the red flags and is wearing rose glasses for sure.
She’s fully aware that this so called friend stood by her past evil actions and even encouraged her, yet she wants to hang onto her for sure reason. She wasn’t even the one that was friend’s with her so this weird attachment is very unusual. The way everyone else around her reacts to this friend should’ve been a wake up call as well but she ignores it all for her own comfort until it bites her in the arse. Go gaslight someone else dummy
I don't really agree I've read many webtooons with villainess characters and this is one of the first where after being reincarnated she earns the affection of the male lead then has to watch him and everyone else die and see her kingdom gradually get ruined and it's perceived to be her fault. Most stories don't start on that premise even less likely when she's a villainess and the villain even earned the ml leads affection and he chose her over his own kingdom he didn't believe it was her fault and he wasn't going to give up on her. A lot of these stories make the guy out to be a jerk but this one doesn't. And all that happened in like the first chapter.
If I were to wake up giving birth in someone else’s body, the nearest truck-kun would’ve been the only thing on my mind.
Shit, the truck is your father, my daughter....
Lmaoo
Her personality is so frustrating :/ she’s trying too hard to be a pussy ass “saint”. Just a few crucial moves on her part would’ve eliminated sm bs up ahead. I don’t like females like her, acting like a religious nut who believes in heaven n hell. Life ain’t black n white b
I bet no one gets to eat their own shit cuz she’s useless or it may be ml who gets the revenge on her behalf, the classic. These shady companies funded by the government responsible for spreading these mass produced propaganda webtoons rlly be thinking that they’re succeeding in brainwashing the female youth into becoming doormats. Only dumb doggies would fall for their shit. Intellectual girls would spit on bs plots like this shit. Read it at face value, don’t become patriarchy’s sow
Her reason makes no sense she could’ve ez destroyed her fam without going through allat I call it lazy writing. Hate seeing her go to such unnecessary lengths, she’s above the damn royals I rather she step on their arrogant faces yet she’s already a sucker for them for no reason
We all know this sweetness, but you know what the laziest form a writting is? A story that gets straight to point and doesn't stick the audience to it. Readers tend to forget that Writers were readers first before they decided to write and for webtoon artists its probably more tedious because they have regulations and teams that alter their original ideas a lot so that it can reach farther and won't be controversial.
I tend to read stories with the author's struggles and identity in mind because authors aren't openly transparent about who they are for fear of criticism. The one who wrote this story could be a young girl or boy for all we know, ya know? So try to be open-minded when reading a story you think was 'lazily' written because no story is writen with a calm mind....they're almost always written with a chaotic mind full of anxiety.
You’re very ill informed if you truly believe the comic industry is full of poor independent writers with a dream. Let me break it down for u and give u a much needed reality check; 95% of the industry is under the same companies responsible for mass producing comics which is why u always see the same old recycled plots and artstyle with no ounce of creativity like this shi here. It is done to pump out as many comics as possibles for some quick cash grab but the government is also involved in it to promote certain ideas in their stories such as rebranding males to girls as a brainwashing method to combat the declining birth rates. Their target audience is young naive girls like u.
You lack imagination if you think that the artist and creators aren't feeling burnout trying to mass produce stories for these companies I mean there are so webtoons out their that do very well SPEAK on this very REAL topic as well......unless you are one of the sad creators that is feeling burnt out....no? I didn't really think so- your sad sack bitch ass attitude to geniunely WISE advice proves how young, naive, AND dimwitted you've obviously outted yourself to be you unimaginative waste of oxygen.
And on more thing for the road just some FUCKING FOOD FOR THOUGHT. "If ya don't like the story.... DON'T FUCKING READ IT THEN" Swear you just like to hear your own asshole-ish mouth run circles around your own unoriginal and OVERUSED ASS TAKE HUH?!?!
Don’t be scared and turn back on your replies pathetic sow. You have zero braincells and incapable of forming a single productive thought. Go read some books, get an education and a much needed life. In your free time you may revere ai for mass producing your favorite comics that touch on such deep subjects such as women becoming sows for their husbands lol. I see where your priorities lie and that’s a perfect future for your futile self.
This is pretty good read but tbh MC can very much be annoying and pathetic. She’s NOT a queen. All her worth and hapiness is reliant on a man…. Sike
She’s like one of those creepy kpop saesangs. This woman lived her past life ever only stalking a man, which drove her to bankruptcy and even that wasn’t a wake up call for her!
She remained clinically obsessed and went as far as killing herself for a man she never even had a connection with :|
Even now she gets on my nerves for the way she talks and reacts in front of him. Like stop being stupid, stuttering and blurting out nonsense. GET UP, literally
I don’t rlly like ML either. Like yea too bad for him, let’s throw a pity party and all, but that’s still on him. As the ML he adds absolutely nothing to the story. He just sits there and allows this crazy woman to hunt him down, it’s kinda like a hostage situation. Not a bit romantic in my opinion.
She’s totally the one wearing the pants in this relationship and he still doesn’t seem to love her fr but has somehow accepted his current situation. It’s giving Barbara the Builder. She’s a waste of space
Ugh as expected she’s the irritating type. I’m not going to comment much on the males because she’s the MC and I’m here for her stupidass. She has repeated the same shit about three whole times now yet she’s still a one track minded Mary sue. I’m already so over her it’s going to be a frustrating ride.
A few chapters in and I already understood why her fake shitty family got killed. Apparently it was done by ML and not the ex regardless I’m thankful to whoever did it.
She’s just too blind to realise her naivety will only bite her in the arse. Hopefully it gets better because apparently she will be the one to kill them this time but I bet it’s going to take her an eternity to get it over with alongside growing some much needed braincells
I prefer morally grey chars and women that put themselves first when needed.
Best thing is def the art. It saves this webtoon from whatever stupid generic tropes it’s hanging onto
This. Also I'm dropping it seems like MC is naive even with the 3rd regression.
what chapter did you realize this because i dropped it around the second chapter when i quickly got the gist. i was like i refuse to waste my time on such books again lmao
Lol atp we’ve all become experts at detecting bs. For me it was ch.10 but I’ll probably give it a go once there are more chapters to binge read as I always do. I don’t think it be too bad for times when you’ve nothing else to read unless u absolutely cannot stand her
there was a storyline skip in her narration (big jump from past life to modern reincarnation life) that wasn't laid out properly and that just screamed lazy writing for me. there are times i read books with no decent storyline/plot but made pretty clear they dont have a strong plot lol this one has. i thought the 1st chap had potential. until i saw the guy with long hair kissed her hand and flirted with her with the same line ive read on other books,,i cringed. it's my fault cus i read it raw i didnt read the summary lol i wouldnt have checked this out had i seen that line "i will become your woman" which means the mc & this book's romance trope aren't my cup of tea.. my bad (=・ω・=)
also this is just me saying it isn't for me. if it's for someone, good for them. to each their own hehe
btw i was already turned off by the writing. the last straw was just the gesture and line the guy made. i know i couldve given it a chance and find out if some of my questions and plot holes will be answered but i didnt wanna be bothered putting up with the guy's cringey advances especially if he's the ml (￣∇￣")
The writing is indeed veryy elementary. I’m so tired of the writing/comic industry in general as they mass produce the same generic stories with no plot, character building, world building etc. Istg even books aimed at 4 year olds have better writing, example Winnie the Pooh.
These companies are responsible for mass producing trash under fake pen names as some quick cash grabs. The industry has completely lost all sense of individuality and has been on a rapid decline for the past 15 years or so now. It’s evident in all forms of literature, I’m so tired of it and have thrown away all kinds of expectations
omg WHAT i havent even thought of that!!! years of reading these books and stumbling across hundreds of them that feels the same (art, story, and writing wise) and i never realized it couldve been mass produced by companies holy shit? yeah you’re right. capitalism truly has swallowed this world whole affecting all parts of the art & media industry that i once thought would have authenticity the longest. we’re doomed
It was when her family was nitpicking on her for some reason. Made me think something is going on and like she's just looking at them lovingly. Also the part where she was the one who wanted the deal but acts as if the guy wanted it like girl be for real.
YES EVERYTHING U SAID
Like ur the beggar in this relationship, act like it. Unnecessary rude ungrateful chars are such a turn off
Nahh atp me and fate would’ve had to duck it out cuz there’s nowayy ur taking my lover away twiceee (well almost but seme resisted) and by the same person at that
The power of fate is far too strong in this manga which doesn’t rlly serve a good purpose in my opinion instead it’s just used as a cheap ploy to invalidate uke’s pain to not make anyone out to be the bad guys. I wanted to be mad at the ex n I still am regardless of what the plot says. Like his bro he should’ve been mad and resisted at the sight of the new bitch instead of falling in love the way he did, weakass punk
If I were uke I wouldn’t have accepted seme. It’s too much to live with the fact that he’s someone else’s fated pair plus the possibility of him getting snatched away especially since they’re all now part of the same fk family
This whole situation is simply too hurtful to be in
We don’t even have omegaverse irl however fated pairs are now my number one enemy. It makes me think based on whose pain is the foundation of ur little romance build??
There is a second volume n now it’s uke’s turn to encounter his fated pair. That is just so unnecessary atp in the plot like just let him be byebye. It would’ve been good had they met prior to seme cuz I don’t like how uke will always be somewhat tied to those traitors but now I don’t want it at all given it’s already too late
I did enjoy reading this cuz I like hurt, angst and it’s pretty interesting hehe
MC’s so addictive to me. From his looks, to personality, to behaviour, everything about him is so mysterious and seductive.
I totally get all the char’s obsession, he’s like an incubus lol. I love the artstyle and hope that it won’t change.