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Hi, Hare here! Just a random here to review the comic so far without giving spoilers
In terms of translation, its translated really well. No real complaints here about it.
In terms of story I'm liking it so far. You can call it typical since it mimics the exact formula of most villainess stuff but its gay. And to be honest thats why I'm not taking off too much for uniqueness. It is gay, its mlm. There's a particular way they go about this that I like. There's no focus really, its completely normal here. Them being gay isnt an obstacle of them being married. Thats refreshing, thats usually a source of conflict. Another thing is, its not sexual. I love reading lgbt+ stories but its a bit hard sometimes because a lot of it is not just over sexualized but full of harmful tropes related to that. Not that this is free of tropes, sadly it does have the taller more dominant guy and shorter weaker guy trope going on. And if you don't know why its labeled harmful, its because this trope came about to fit heteronormative tastes. Its nice that they're just lgbt+. Now if in the future they make a fuss over it I may lower the score, since this was a big part of my enjoyment. The normalcy of two guys being engaged.
I'll give this an 8/10 Hare Score! Feel free to recommend me more lgbt+ things like this! I would love to read more nonsexual stories that dont make a fuss about 'but youre a [blank] and i am too we can't!' I'll post a new score in 20-30 new chapters updated ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~ This has been Hare Reviews!
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Hi, Hare here! Just a random here to review the comic so far without giving spoilers
I love this story a lot, and am doing a character popularity contest, thats an older comment feel free to look for it.
Critically, its a good translation. Even better on Webtoons, i do recommend you heart all the webtoons chapters, its good to show support on the official platform so webtoon keeps funding the comic! I can't take points off for the translation, from what i remember all the chapters were good.
Story wise, i adore this story. I'm a novel reader i am biased. I saw some concerns, this is a no harem story. Theres barely any romance. On top of that, this is being adapted from the webnovel/edited version of the story. If you were wondering what was edited, it was because fans started to send hate to the author for the implication of gay characters/feelings(i won't go into who, but readers already know). So if there was any substance of romance, it has been taken out this version. There's a couple nods to potential here or there, but it's squashed really fast. This story is mainly here to entertain and make you cry. Grab your tissues.
Overall....10/10 HARE SCORE, I WILL ALWAYS RECCOMEND ORV I AM BIASED. I'll post a new score in 40-50 new chapters updated ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~ This has been Hare Reviews!
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Hi, Hare here! Just a random here to review the comic so far without giving spoilers
Critically, as in translation, for the most part good. Not every chapter is translated by the same people. There's Reaper Scans, Flame Scanes, and Reset Scans as notable ones. Manh readers likely recognize Flame Scanes and Reaper Scans since they both do some quality translations. Bad translations are definitely mixed in, and occasionally translators who talk too much for TL or post their logo everywhere(likely to prevent theft). Overall its a lot better than most stuff on here for translation, its especially better for later chapters.
Storywise, I'm enjoying it. Whole dungeons themselves aren't a new concept, this is a litrpg after all, this is a decently unique take. The lore does steadily build up, We're currently entrenched in it as of recent chapters. Its nice to see lore stack up like this. The supporting cast is also really entertaining, sometimes i like them more than our MC.
Overall, I'm going to give this a 8.75/10 Hare Score! I took points off for the occasional bad translations I mentioned. I'll post a new score in 20-30 new chapters updated ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~ This has been Hare Reviews!
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[Tearful Frostborn Dreamer has revealed her moniker to the public]
[Tearful Frostburn Dreamer has an announcement!]
This is a fun popularity contest I'm doing for characters! I will be doing our main gang!Just comment once to vote! ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~ let's get this started!!!
Kim Dokja
-Our favorite rat bastard! A man who needs therapy so bad he got a skill! Father of two!
Yoo Joonghyuk
-A man who sucks at expressing himself so much that every emotion comes off as angry! He does in fact care, and his anger is in fact his endearment...most of the time.
Han Sooyoung
-Beloved plagiarist o' mine!This lady is more likely to be a snake rather than a dragon, but we love her regardless!!
Yoo Sangah
-This badass lady went from being an amazing corporate worker to being a badass incarnation
Lee Gilyoung
-A baby with a horrifying scary protection amd loyalty yo Dokja. The kid loves his dad, and has been willing to kill for him since day 1.
Shin Yoosung
-Dokja's second kid and incarnation, was supposed to be a disaster but now is Dokja's little miracle with her impressive skills and luck
Jung Heewon
-Our fiery flame of Justice who became Dojka's sword early on. She hates injustice and evil to the point her blood boils.
Lee Hyunsung
-One big giant metal puppy!!!! A strong man, with a strong will. If you want to know what a golden retriever is like look his way!
Lee Jihye
-A teenager who had to kill her own bestie, probably more traumatized than you think! Dokja's biggest hater is what she'd like to think but she trusts him.
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[The Constellation 'Tearful Frostborn Dreamer' says that the constellation above managed to pick only one, so surely the constellation 'The Moonlight Watcher' can pick 2!]
[The Constellation 'Tearful Frostborn Dreamer' suggests spinning a wheel of favorites to help decide on the two incarnations who will be sponsored]
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Hi, Hare here! Just a random here to review the comic so far without giving spoilers
Critically, talking about translation, its...okay. Its not the best translation, even though the same group has done chapters names do ping pong. I can't remember if they did all the chapters but i do know for several chapters i noticed names changing, was the same. Also spelling mistakes every now and again. Grammar errors as well. Its not severe enough for me to be lost however and the font it good. I can ignore it for the most part.
In terms of story, I am really liking it so far! There's a couple gimmicks and small lore bits that strike me as unique or interesting. I also like that it seems like the FL is going to have slow character development not an instant switch.
I'm giving 'The Monster Princess' an 8.75/10 Hare Score! I'm very excited to see further developments. I'll post a new score in 10-20 new chapters updated ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~ This has been Hare Reviews!
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Hi, Hare here! Just a random here to review the comic so far without giving spoilers
On the objective side for quality, as in the translation, it's better than some but not great. Teenmanhua has improved a little ??? Not much however, a lot of their sentences don't make sense and would just need a little grammar fixing. It does make some parts harder to follow. No repeat or glitched pages however. There is a cleaning error i noticed at one point in a newer chapter. The font is readable at least unlike some.
On the story side, I am liking the FL but I don't love her. I will admit she is smart and a good getter but i feel like she put up with something for too long. At least when she's had it, she's had it. I will admit i had to pause to rant to my fiance about her situation several times. Trash really does belong in the trash can. The story is enjoyable, personally. ML is...okay so far. Personally I am withholding he seems like basic textbook ML so far but we honestly haven't seen too much about his personality.
I am giving 'Don’T Pick Up What You’Ve Thrown Away' a 7/10 Hare Rating!!! The translation definitely hurt it, but its also something i feel i can get confused with a bunch of other stories. Not stand out but not a bad read! I'll post a new score in 10-20 new chapters updated ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~ This has been Hare Reviews!
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Hi, Hare here! Just a random here to review the comic so far without giving spoilers
Objectively, this comic is currently lacking good translations. Not only that, but some pages on chapters were doubled. Some of the font was horrible to read as well! Someone seems to be updating it with better quality but not many currently.
On the other side of things, while the poor translations make it difficult to follow in some areas, the story so far is fun. I will complain that at one point it seems like the story, regardless of translations, sorta jumped alittle. We got a plot device, forgot it for a chapter and then it was brought back. It made me wonder if i was reading the right chapter. I do like that our FL is smart and is doing her best to survive and strive. She is not a sitting duck FL. I won't say she's extremely outgoing but her plans pay off. Also we actually don't know much about her past, its being spoonfed to us slowly!
I'm giving "The Male Lead’s Nephew Loves Me So Much" a 7.25/10 Hare Score! It was hurt by the translation which led me to being confused very often. its saving grace is that its interesting. I'll post a new score in 10-20 new chapters updated ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~ This has been Hare Reviews!
I did a character popularity contest! Not a lot of people voted but I'm still psorong results. If you have a problem with the results, if you can find that comment and put your votes in, I'll update the winners. Only once tho!
The winner is Kim Dokja in first! Second place is Jung Heewon
Yay love the results
Anyone can take the second place I love them all equally
But but the first place is only for Dokja-ssi(▰˘◡˘▰)