Thank you so much for picking this story up you are such a wonderful person
i think that it would have been really cool if they did all the seven sins like gluttony, sloth, lust, pride etc. it would have been more interesting then them just fucking it was hot but a lot more could have been done with this concept
i really enjoyed their story, lots of strong emotions in this. Honestly i feel like i can take some life lesson from this. Although near the end it felt rushed at some parts i really do love this story so it makes up for that
this chapter was fast paced it was a little hard to keep up cause Mako's emotions changed so fast and there wasn't much inner dialogue.
this story was..........interesting i don't know how to feel about this but i do gotta say that the sex scenes were hot
Agh! That was supposed to be a thumbs up, not a down!
I have the same feeling as you
Bet it's the blonde guy in the first chapters with a kid