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I DEF THINK THIS WAS GREAT ESP ART + FLOW HAD ME ON MY TOES but idk gen no hate maybe i was geeked out on sleep deprivation but i really wish i felt more ache at the main couple? maybe bc it was the translations or smth but i feel like there weren't enough vulnerable moments (esp early on and in the middle) that made me really feel that yearn and pain also this might just be me being picky but i feel like the ending was kinda rushed? like holy info dump in the last chapter LMAO and the kidnapping done by that gate keeper person lowk so corny plot convenience