ermm i sacrificed my sleep for this the author should’ve established the deep bond between the mc and his brother in the beginning of the story, rather than throwing a few quick scenes of them together and expecting the audience to empathize over their seperation and understand the mc’s desperation to help his brother. because if im being honest with y’all rn, i felt no sympathy over the brother and only saw him as a nuisance (and these sentiments were amplified when the brother literally got used by that entity *fck i forgot his name alr*). mf irritated me from the very beginning lololol i’m sorry y’all
listen, author. i will not read this shit properly if u aint even giving kile the spotlight that he deserves. i skimmed through the whole thing expecting kile to be you know.. THE MAIN CHARACTER! and you’re hinting that THAT piece of garbage is a pOtEnTial LOvE IntErEsT? nobody in this story treats kile like a separate individual. they’re always ray this, ray that. MAN FUCK ALL OF YOU
and also the fact that a lot of readers are just skimming through this story says a lot
honestly i get why people are mad like the story is a lot about ray but as a person that has a brother and is close i feel the story is really showing the nature of siblings being close but having completely different lives and the fact no one is treating him as his own person really displays the living in your brothers shadow i’m very positive all the ray crap is part of kiles development as a person and character the story really does a nice job showing the relationship of brothers that people make out to be a race but with that being said i’m very mad at lou his “feelings” for kile aren’t real he only is that way cause of his feelings for ray i have no idea if ray even comes back to life if that happens i just have a feeling things are going to be messy
ive seen this on tiktok sometimes, is this still worth reading?
Yeah if you're down for a roller coaster ride. And btw, you might end getting the second male lead syndrome