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Way to many flashbacks for the start of the story makes the flow feel choppy
Really? Then we'd have similar people to yourself complaining about how everything wasn't explained right at the beginning if that didn't happen.... Haizzzz....
I’m not complaining I’m just giving my constructive criticism. Your example is stupid and has nothing to do with my point so I’ll ignore it.
Started a yoai where one of the main characters is transported from a medevial type world to present day korea but slashes the chest of the other main character who lives in korea bonding them in some way i can't recall.
Liebling
Thanks, that's the one!
Welcome ╮(￣▽￣)╭
At least we won’t be dealing with a overthinking angsty FL