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Hey I feel the same. Especially with that last panel, “something just feels off about him.” Maybe that was meant for comic relief but honestly I felt this was low for Dojin. It’s okay to have fantasies people!

Here would have been a more entertaining storyline that could have even gone on for another chapter (IMHO)....
Hyesung’s friends disclose Hyesung’s peculiar behavior around omegas to Dojin (same scene).
D goes to pick up H from school but ‘happens’ to come early. D sees H talking to an omega outside. D witnesses H blushing and (maybe acting bashful like he was with Chowon?)... D is shocked and then pissed. Wtf expression was that, Hyesung!?! Lol ...H notices D’s car and runs over. He’s blushing and D’s annoyed. D asks him who that was or tries to pry info but H blows him off and D shuts up but starts scheming as would be true to character lol.
D catches him watching omega porn (same scene except somehow without that ending.) They get into a hissy fit...this can be commentary on not presuming ppl’s sexual preferences/behaviors based on their affinity for particular genres porn/smut...Like the fact that the majority of BL/yaoi is written by/for hetero cis F and 1/3 of hetero cis F prefer M on M gay porn. How meta just like the LIAI fandom! Lol. Also prompts the question of what it means to have sexual fantasies of multiple partners while in a committed monogamous relationship.
Grocery store scene happens. D has had it. “Fine if you like them so much, pick one for us.” Says D to H. Once H gets over the initial shock they actually start looking...but in truth, a game a chicken (and misunderstandings) commences. The back and forth here is the two of them pushing the envelope to test how far the other will go. It could be that D had initially suggested a threesome to shock H out of his fantasy but was shocked himself when H agreed and now D feels extremely possessive and so he tries to evoke jealousy in his wife by going along with the plan rather enthusiastically. H is initially turned on by the idea and the dormant ‘alpha identity’ rears its head again (funny antics begin). They go on an escort site like Ashley Madison of the omegaverse lolll and then go on these super fancy dinners to essentially vet their potential omega partner. a lot of internal monologues and cursing each other out internally...lol... no omega they meet is good enough (subtly revealing their true feelings) but neither will cave. Tensions build, pushing each other to the edge while at dinner with the latest omega to the point that one of them is just like “PERFECT! GREAT! FUCK IT IM IN! DON’T YOU AGREE HONEY?!?!” And/or “SO HAPPY TO MAKE YOUR DREAMS COME TRUE!” Lol or something...that has then go up to the SUPER FANCY hotel suite. Shower separately.... (get super fucking angry having arguments to themselves about the other in the shower...but as they are husband/wife their convo is actually totally in sync and the poor omega is like, “I wonder who’s gonna cave first lol. I should get paid for more for this.”
They come out in robes shining all sparkly sexy like lol and enter from opposite sides of the suite with the bed/omega in the middle... Like an old western showdown/duel lol...D brandishes a bottle of champagne, H brandishes a bowl of chocolate covered strawberries. D pops the bottle it explodes. H aggressively shoves his hand into the bowl of strawberries, and shoves a fistful into his mouth, strawberries topple over and his face is an adorable, angry mess of chocolate as he chews intensely. Then panel of omega trying really hard to quell laughter. D begins walking to the bed still glaring at his wife. H does the same. they reach the omega. Each put a stiff hand on each of the omega’s shoulders. still glaring at one another. “Well?” dares Dojin. Then in unison D+H bring their hands to the ties of their respective robes still playing chicken of who will drop trow first...H unknots the robe and with damning conviction strips in one fell swoop. D freaks and throws himself onto H as he yells, “NO!!!!” He’s on his knees wrapping his chest around where H’s peen would be exposed only to realize H is wearing boxers. H feels his husband is commando as his silk robe was partially untied though only to see if his wife would actually go through with it.
“YOU DIS-ROBED?!!”
“YOU WERE NAKED UNDERNEATH?!!”
....the omega laughs and sees himself out.
H and D finally concede and talk it all out. Yay. D brought that toy and says I wish I could take back all the ppl I slept with or whatever he said same scene but what changes is that he says says it’s normal to have sexual fantasies and supports H exploring his alpha fantasy, but wants to do so just between the two of them. “How?” H asks....and D answers him by whipping out the toy and slowly (and with consent!) begins jacking off H with it. same convo but without the weird shaming and H being super uncomfortable..more like, “how does it feel? This is what it feels like inside of an omega.” -D
“This is what it feels like inside of me?” H asks...
D stops. “No.”
H looks back at him. Intense sultry stare. a kiss. Bites lip. “Nothing compares to what it feels like when I’m inside of you.” Slips that monster alpha d*ck into H. H yells out. They embrace each other aggressively. “nothing compares to what it feels like when we do it.” Says D as he grabs his wife and stands up reverse cowgirl style banging the shitttttt of out H. H throws that toy across the room and they make sweet sweet love in the fashion that they always have. The toy isn’t blasphemy to use (as was almost indicated in the chapter...but H just doesn’t really get off to it as he initially thought he would). Then weeks later a package comes in the mail from an adult toy store. D gives the unopened box to H...H tells him he has a sexy surprise for him later. They’re getting ready for the reveal. D is waiting anxiously in bed imagining all hot things it might be...sexy cosplay/nipple tassels/lace panties and hosiery, maybe even a blind fold with light bondage...)
Last panel of H busting through the bedroom door all superhero like wearing a ginormous (lightsaber lol) strap on, big ole bottle o lube in one hand and a “How to Peg an Alpha for Dummies” guidebook in the other and a huge, determined grin on his face while D’s dead on the bed and his soul rises up out of him.

Wow that was one long ramble lol. Sorry!!


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I understand you. Everyone hating on Param smh. I decided to stop reading the comments section bcs that'd just make me mad

Same ~. Some of these people need to spend some time in the real world.

So the plot is a shitfest but the whole omegaverse thing is ok with you? Since you are ok with omega verse, that universe has each own rules. Also if he is 18 he is legally an adult in many countries, not a kid (like USA, many europeans). You speak about grooming in a universe where there are fated pairs and pheremone animal attraction.

I agree with you, lmao.

But he is not 18, he's 17 yrs old which if we're talking about RL (and not fiction) he will still be a minor in many other countries including the USA.

Well in the fictional universe of the omegas things may not be the same. I believe if we feel like social warriors we should fight for real things like marriage of underage girls with old men and not whine about things in erotic fantasy.

I am not pretending to be a social warrior. I am not trying to call the author out or point out the issues with this story. If fact, I'm literally laughing my ass off because of the CRINGE in this. You obviously did not understand a word I said. See I like omegaverse but I'm not rating and judging this manga based on the fact that it's omegaverse. I'm rating it based on the fact that it's absolutely badshit crazy so stop acting like a little bitch. My post was full off jokes that were supposed to make people laugh (like the grooming joke) because everyone in the comment section was taking this way too seriously for their own good and yet you once again bring a fight for some greater justice to a comment section on an illegal site for gay porn. Give me a goddamn break.

So you whine like a little bitch about grooming and underage rape, but I am the whining bitch that tells you to not scrutinizing a sex manga? Oh and the best part "I was joking, I wasn't saying all these things seriously". If you just said what you like or not about the manga you could say "I do not like the older CEO cliche" or "I prefer this and that". Also I am sorry to tell you that the cover is not some BDSM stuff....it supposed to be a red string of fate (another yaoi cliche).

Lmao mate you need to calm down xdd
Yes I was joking. The topic is literally named "ah yes, the cringe" in the first sentence I said I'm laughing. I pointed out that I'm not taking this seriously several times. I never said I don't like the tropes in this, it's the tropes that I find funny in the first place. My topic was not me whining or being angry about social issues because I know this is an erotic fiction. What the hell is your problem? Are you just angry because I called you a bitch? Once again, you completely misunderstood and picked a fight under my comment. And the BDSM part is also a joke. In fact, might as well tell you now before you grab on another straw, everything written in between umlauts (which is this "") is THE joke, that's why it's quoted. How else am I supposed to distinguished jokes nowadays? I literally wrote "muhahahah" how could you take it seriously?