Hitomi Yagami want to read (All 74)
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Like, the plot was interesting, the story had fucking potential... but everything was happening too fast and suddenly they had to make characters tell what you were missing in between, the building was messy because of that... i couldn't empathize with anyone: time skips all the time, no relationship building, rie and akiyuki's past seems sketchy, what about the trial? Did they make raimu testify? And do they only meet once a year? And what about this 14-year-old raimu who pushed akiyuki to become family and took care of him? And we are told rie cheated and end of story? No arguing no reflection on their relationship from any side? And Taro's story was so cut off that we don't understand anything at all about him, his motivations, nothing at all.... Istg that if they wrote 3 or 4 more chapters this could have been an amazing heartfelt story and much better developed!
I feel like there must be a chapter misding or sth between chapters 2 and 3. Like... how do we go from "I don't know you. Don't come back" to "Do you wanna meet this weekend?" And the guy at the end seemed like he was waiting for Ryosuke... just from that time in chapter 2? Doesn't seem credible enough