unnecessarily complicated, and redundant.
this is bad.
wasted potential.
garbage.
silly.
another basic shit.
Is a moron
MC learned shit.
Yeah like man, she’s doing all wrong
Oh my goodness, this is so basic.
lol, the amount of downvotes
Trying too hard to find a balance between the romance, the magic, and the conflict. Reading this is like having brain freeze.
unnecessarily complicated, and redundant.