spending all this time talking about spells when theres almost no reason to, how they work and what they're called doesnt seem to be at all important to the plot, so why bother with it. youve got an entire page of people shouting spells and for what? they don't actually do anything so you waste an entire page. this could be a good story but it feels like the author is more interested in what they think is cool (the spells) and not what actually would make this interesting (getting to the fucking point)
this is like the ultimate cnc fantasy thank you comments telling me they fuck every chapter. did not disappoint.
Deadass started reading this bcs of this comment LOL you're right but it's very light cnc i wish there's atleast some crying and attempts to runaway from feeling too much
Cnc ?
consensual nonconsent
Thank you
bro wtf did i just read.... that was like trying to listen to someone's trip story except they're a terrible story teller... my god. bro how do u write a shojo where not even one single character has chemistry this is insane...
feel like i just read 2 separate books about 2 separate groups of people lol. absolutely no continuity, art or character. i enjoyed myself with both, but very confusing as to why it was done this way.
remmiiiiiiiiiii queeeeeeeeeeeeeen. i dont even stan but remi is an exception. if she was real id show up to fan meets waving those light up wands.
its woooooorse how are you even more of a bitchhhhhhhh god i hope ariel gets a couple punches in on blondie. useless loser cant dont literally anything and then gets mad at her cause she doesn't "Trust" him. sorry trust you to do what exactly?? sit on your thumb for 12 years while her situation stays bad? id trust my cat to get more done for me in 12 years
its not often that i like a story with no real setbacks for the mc, but this really turned into a comfort read. yes everything should go perfectly. everything should work out the way mc wants it. i feel pleasant. see you later yall
stop uploading this shit sucks!! let the last person upload id rather just wait lmao. nobody wants this please leave us in peace
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im hoping this doesnt turn out with them permanently switching bodies and keigetsu's body (reirin) becoming empress. i feel like the author is steering in that direction, but im hoping it doesn't happen. reasons i think it might:
1) keigetsu feels fine in reirin's body and vice versa, but reirin feels like she's dying in her original body
2) reirin just plain likes keigetsu's body more
3) keigetsu will get away from the unfair hatred if she continues to be in reirin's body
4) the prince marrying reirin (kou) would upset the power balance in the royal court. but marrying keigetsu (shu) would not
5) prince doesn't seem to have a physical problem with keigetsu's body (see his reaction at her sogdian dance)
6) the other consorts want to use reirin's sickliness as the reason she cannot become empress, this stops being a problem if reirin is in keigetsu's body
7) keigetsu for sure has a thing for reirin, and i genuinely think she likes being in reirin's body more (both as a vessel, and as proof of their relationship)
8) leelee will get to be with reirin more easily if reirin is in keigetsu's body.