The pacing is sooo off
So i got confused mid read
And somethings just made no sense
So far i liked it
But what lost me was that nonsense of an ex( green haired in ch 6 ) that kissed him like wtf
Also BRO THE ART STYLE CHANGE
IT WENT FROM BUENO TOP TIER TO YIKES
IS I TOLD YALL !!!
NAH THIS STORY WAS CRAZYYYYY
SMUT WAS BUENO
POWER BOTTOM
IDK I MESS WITH THIS STORY YALL
This is the type of progress i like
Nice and realistic feel
ALSO THE ML AND MC I LOVE THE DYNAMIC ( ITS REFRESHING)
BUT LIKE FUCK THE BF HELLO?!?
ALSO GUYS I THINK THIS IS A SHORT STORY CAUSE SO FAR THERES ONLY 20 chs
AND I KNOW HE WANTED TO DEVOUR HER PUNANI AND MAKE HER CU- ight im done
Im just happy he got a likkle taste yk
IM EXCITED FOR THE NEXT CHS CAUSE I KNOW WE FINNA EAT BUENO
I really dont like the ml so far… hes acting like they havent been friends simce childhood
To disappear and ignore your childhood friend and then pop up and act like nothing happened
And shes YOUR FRIEND…. Bro. And top of that he treats her like shit like bro she wants to know whats wrong..
i feel like hes using the the fact that she like him too much
Either way bro i dont like him and
I hope the other guy comes in AND SAVE HER
That these fuckers have a happy ending?!?
I beg your finest pardon
THE CHEATER GETS A HAPPY ENDING?!?
UH DROPPED THIS JUST IRKED ME
a spoiler cutton is there for a reason. thanks for ruining it for some of us.
Like people didnt comment this before me ( where i found the info out)ヾ(╹◡╹)ﾉ~
Cause they dont even have a spoiled tag on their shi so
PLEASE BSFR
Yeah, I got spoiled and it wasn't even from you. It was from someone way before you. So, this person should go on the others who spoiled it also and say the same thing they said to you. I hate it when people choose to single out one person when there's clearly other people doing it too. Keep that same energy for those other people too.
But I'm glad I was spoiled I hate cheating stories. Like you, I skimmed through a few chapters too, to see what all was going on and it's a pure shit show. I'm already reading some Shit Show stories so, not gonna add this one on to the list. Lol.
Also, "I beg your finest pardon" tickled me so much. I've heard of "I beg your pardon" of course, but not with the word "finest" in it. I'll be saying that from now on lol.
Oh, that wasn't you that said they skipped and skimmed through the chapters. Lol Pay no attention to that part of my comment. Sorry about that.
All i can say is LEO IMA NEED THAT PLAYLIST (▰˘◡˘▰)