
Art is 10/10 & characters were cute but omg the story is so boring... Legit took me 7 months to finish it because I kept losing interest while reading it.... Eventually forced myself to finish it and wow, the mediocrity is actually insaneeeee
Must be some type of a talent to be able to create a story this mid with supposedly interesting characters and theme. Some artists legit can only draw and literally nothing else lmfaoo ☠

ik this story started with rape, but I still didn't expect it to be THAT toxic. Turns out it's way worse than I tought, and I'm here for it lmao.
I just hope this one doesn't go down the shite route like 'no reason' (i don't reccomend that one btw, that shit is gay torture porn that's over 50ch long, stay AWAY)

Seme is such a bitch. Dumb as hell, won't listen for shit and can't even make uke happy (so far, at least). Physically he's also, like, what? A three? Four probably on his best days. This story is legit trynna make a guy with the personality of an unimpressive booger look hot / interesting. Sorry but it's not working for me.
I'm here ONLY for the uke, who for some reason, despite being a 10, is hell bent on settling for a socially inept, low iq incel....

I'm not even gonna act like I understand what the hell is going on anymore.... I mean, I love the characters but the plot is all over the place...

Heinry's people were responsible for the decline of mages in the eastern empire. It doesn't sound like he set the plan in motion to cause mages to lose their magic the plan was too complicated to be a quick short term thing, but he definitely had some involvement but it's sounds like he's stopping the plan because he has his empress. Trasha about to be exposed for passing her baby off as the emperor's and I'll bet money that hawk was a Western empire bird person spy. And Shovshit sent our Navier a expensive gift he promised to give her after they had their child, she's gonna send it back through Heinry.
Yaoi authors wil make literally every character gay
.... And the lesbians are always loud spoken girls with unnaturally strong physique like bruh... I feel like that's actually offensive to real lesbians, like they're a must-have accessory for gay dudes or smth
We (lesbians) get along with gays because we are the same souls with different genders and go through the same problems
True.. I'm a lesbian too and I had a lot of gayfriends until now we openly share our problems well we don't accept narrow-minded in our circle ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
bro ur missing my point. I'm saying in yaoi stories SPECIFICALLY, the lesbians are literally decor. irl i don't give a fuck what you do and who ur friends with, I KNOW you have gay friends. Move along.
I mean lesbians don’t pop up that often in yaoi and gays don’t appear often in yuri. Like i can probably count on my hands the times it occurred in either. Heck in ALL romance media, literally everyone except the main couple barely exist.
And the maybe lesbians appeared for all of half a chapter in a side story, the author’s very obviously not gonna focus on them because they’re not even side characters.
Also this author’s art style is just strong for both men and women. But if you look at any other BL, lesbians aren’t drawn to be particularly strong or masculine in physique, they look like any other women in the artist’s style.
Umm duhhh. The story is about gay men, specifically the main couple. Why tf would lesbians be the focus lol. How many times do u read a lesbian story, or straight story where gay men are the focus ☠
You have entirely missed my point.
I'm saying, if the author wants to add other couples it doesn't ALWAYS have to be lesbians or other gay couple. It makes me cringe because it's so corny.... It's legit wattpad writers level of bad writing. And not only are these lesbians are also ALWAYS the same troupe. It's such cheap writing, dude. Have some fucking wit. Or at least TRY to.
Or hey, better yet!! If these other couple aren't important or pivotal then WHY even add them in the first place? Am I the only one noticing this is just the author trying to make thirst traps to lure in a specific audience who overly glorifies same-sex couples??
If you still don't get what I mean, idk what else to say, move along bro