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Imma be absolutely hoenst here... the early chapters had HORRENDOUS art and dialogue. Like, I know you're trying to make it sound authentic as possible but the lines were so corny and unreal it made me cringe everytime they said git or bonkers or fucking what else. The art being inconsistent and disproportionate also didn't help in making me not want to drop this story and hang myself too lmao. Both art and dialogue kinda made the early part of the story unenjoyable as those were crucial for the delivery of the plot and story.
M just SO FUCKING GLADDDDD it god better 10x like I would reread the later chapters all year but the earlier ones I'd never fucking look at ever again