i liked that the bottom licked the top’s mouth to show he liked it (when the top said “give me a sign”), but the top was still too forceful. i’ll let it slide since the artist had only a limited amount of pages to conclude this
this author has the opportunity to do something truly incredible (make this not SA)
putting all this talent in a story so shitty… could have at least made him consent. even though he was drunk, i might have put up with it. but he even said it himself at the end, “this is the guy who raped me”… if this was his choice of words in the original and they’re still gonna end up together, this is so lame. disappointed but not surprised
“wait” “stop” “it’s really painful” “i feel like throwing up”
“who would have thought that you were forced to do it” “from now on, we should have sex like lovers” “i want us to enjoy this together” … bro
not me immediately going back to see if the rings on the dresser matched with the ones ae was wearing haha
fuck this tbh. you have a willing guy here who clearly wants to bottom and still you find a way to turn this into sexual assault? really? subtly trying to paint the top as a good guy cause he stopped midway with a “just kidding” isn’t gonna cut it bitch
does he stick his finger into an outlet to get his hair like that wtf
if i was still in my makoharu era i’d be elated… but i’m not anymore and this looks generic af
nahhh stereotypical big arrogant tops are bad but unconventional small arrogant tops are somehow even worseeee
somebody further down the comments said something about conflict in storytelling but you know there’s good conflict and then there’s whatever was done here. lazy conflict. you can find the SA to “being assaulted by another person finally made me realize my true feelings” pipeline in every third yaoi. it’s overused (I would even go as far as to say it’s normalized) and rarely shows consequences for the perpetrators (see ch 4 here, this mf got a way with a measly slap on the hand err I mean face, just to get used as comedic relief right after). if some of y’all get entertained by this then by all means!! go ahead!! but I’ll be here bitching about it
cakeverse…. my god…. now i’ve truly seen it all…
looks pretty generic tho so i’ll probably drop
even if it’s cliche… please…. i’m begging… bring him back... i need them to be happy
