i unlocked at least 3 new facial expressions while reading this
yeah well anyway i’m not feeling it between those two. give me more about the bartender instead
if this is only 1 volume then i understand why they’re speed running the “getting over” part but this really isn’t helping the authenticity
idk how i feel about this tbh. it doesn’t feel alright because he’s only 18 but it also doesn’t feel bad because he’s already 18… iykwim
author thought they were so smart for putting that “bdsm is all about respecting each other” in here
lmao I was just like "brother this wasn't even consensual no safe word no discussions nothin"
nah bruh he was gonna rape him. not gonna let that slide
how did ML go from a tipsy “when i’m with you, i feel calm. i don’t want to go home just yet” to “do you know what you’re suggesting?”. never mind that MC clearly did NOT know what he was “suggesting”. “you came onto me”, “no, i didn’t” - that was the perfect moment to clear up the misunderstanding or whatever you wanna call it, but it got brushed off. adding to this the constant hesitancy on MC’s part while they were having sex… even though this was not full on rape, this wasn’t two fully consenting guys having sex either.
at the end of this i was like “we got consent, height difference, great art AND a goal. i’m sold” and then i remembered that this is a one shot