da3rakun

I’m not really feeling where the story’s going. Stuff happens, but none of it leads to anything meaningful. Honestly, I’m not even into the romance between the leads—I came for the revenge. I want to see Rachel setting the stage for Liz, but that payoff just isn’t coming through. The recent chapters have been kind of a drag.

Sure, Theo’s slowly realizing his feelings, and Liz is finally seeing that her sister’s been putting on a brave face for her. But they’re wasting time while Rachel does all the heavy lifting. And let’s be real—Rachel’s too soft for me. Her way of handling enemies just doesn’t hit. I wanted fire and strategy, not this low-stakes, slow pacing.

FL’s got solid support—except for that awful mother-daughter pair. But she’s way too naive… like, how do you go from a one-night stand to pregnancy and still have zero awareness?

Her dad and brother spoil her (since her mom’s gone), so no surprise she’s so sheltered. Some moments had me rolling my eyes hard. Really hoping she toughens up, grows some backbone, and cuts those two out. I’ll sit on it for now.