
The premise of this story captivated me from the start. In the dim, pulsating atmosphere of a club, my heart raced as I witnessed the burgeoning love between our main characters. Yet, there's a haunting shadow hanging over the protagonist, a turbulent past that clings to him like a ghost, compounded by a profound trauma surrounding blood. It’s a delicate and promising narrative. Now? They both quit their jobs at the club, we still aren't going in depth about our mc’s backstory, and now we are focusing on the side couple out of no where?!
Clearly majority of us do not care about this side couple. And yet we go back to the main one in this chapter and it feels like they all lost their minds. They used to be smart and filled with dexterity.
For me, it feels like the author went through amnesia and forgot who their characters were in episode 1… I am so devastated as I used to be excited for this story. And yet another story is slowly going toward the gutter with its plot.
What a shame.

I'm always someone who never cares about the second couples in stories. But this one is really grating on me. They should've slightly teased this side couple having potential but still continuing the main plot. That creates intrigue and thus make people interested. Just shoe-horning them in for no reason doesn't add that— I don't care about the sick mother, I don't care about any of this.

Interesting…. The flow of their relationship was rushed. There never was a confession or anything to show that the uke was falling for him. Like sure there was memories of him when he was young. But there never was a reference that he particularly was looking for the boy servant. It just seemed like he had memories of his past pop up. I’ve seen more memories of him and red hair together and that he’d cry at those memories in comparison to the seme…Their chemistry had potential but it just felt too rushed.
The plot was confusing. I kinda pieced it together in the end. But this story kinda felt like a skeleton of what a fleshed out story could’ve been. A shame

I told you guys that all Tj is is a bundle of negativity that holds Ian back and makes him miserable. But nooooo. All Tj is is someone who belongs in the past and changed. Ian is a new person now. Jo can show him the mundane things of life that the average person experiences. Like looking at the stars. Ian is tired of people scared of him all the time.

Honestly I’m usually more critical but this one was not too serious of a story so I won’t dock it on world building when it comes to the alien aspect. I’m kinda dissatisfied with how it ended with the dad. I want that asshole to pay horribly with karma. How he ripped the family picture along with destroying the MC’s house in the end pissed me off. He needs to pay.
I do feel like the other characters lacked a bit. But honestly I quite enjoyed the story despite that. It was a bit of a lighthearted,funny, story with elements of sadness through family trauma. Could it have been better? Yeah. Was it still nice to ready and butterfly inducing? 100%
That chapter was crazy short.