beta
Idk if it’s the pacing, the plot, the characters or all of the above but I just can’t get in to this story. It’s just a super fast paced cliche story that’s feels super rigid and doesn’t flow right. Like she’s really gonna just show up and act super nice and kick out the maid when the original FL was the one who was way worse. Like at least make it a natural change instead just having her take over the body and all of sudden she wins the favor of everyone from day 1