There were huge redundancies. The story of the fire over and over. The pace was weird. Really slow at first then it went very fast. Good story. Just could have used some tweaks.
I have to drop. Getting a headache trying to understand. And if they call the department store a grocery store once more Too bad.
Right I wish the author would just hurry up and stop dragging the story on with these annoying events
There were huge redundancies. The story of the fire over and over. The pace was weird. Really slow at first then it went very fast. Good story. Just could have used some tweaks.