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Jeong Jiheon, a once-promising swimmer, retired early due to an injury and now works diligently at a...
I’m going to give it a try but I just finished reading the 4th chapter and the amount of exposition is making this a difficult read. I understand wanting to give background info but you don’t have to explain every minute detail about everything at the beginning. Explain things as you go. Having a character ask multiple questions back to back just to give background info is such a lazy way of writing. Ex: MC just woke up from not remembering having a one night stand with a guy that’s watching tv on his couch…why is the conversation an in depth explanation about the ML’s preferred romantic partners, past swimming events and pheromone chips(?). Y’all don’t have everything else more pertinent to discuss?