beta
I’m so happy I waited for this to be completed because this is hands down one of the best manhwas I have ever read. Litch binged it, 10/10 pacing, characters and plot. I will deffo be rereading.
The art was great but imo the storyline could’ve been developed a bit more. I’m aware the author prob didn’t want to make the manhwa too long but there were a few things I would’ve liked to see more of.
1) heejae and seyoungs past. I feel like there could’ve been more depth on their relationships with their parents, especially since it’s deeply affected their personalities and how they treat each other.
2) hyejin and woohyeon. The one or two episodes where we saw woohyeon wasn’t enough, I feel like the story would’ve flowed better if they’re irl characters were more involved in the plot.
3) heejaes revenge/pov. The pov switch was really refreshing but I feel like it was slightly rushed and ended quite abruptly. Also the part where he was doing all of this for revenge was mentioned but never got discussed after he fell for seyoung. This was deffo a huge part of contention for the cause of their relationship so it should’ve had its own moment imo.
I had more points but these were the biggest ones for me. Again this is MY OPINION but I’m open to hearing others too.