
I don't think it's bad, but I feel like something is missing. :(

Hopefully it will get better with time! I'm only reading it here, so I have no idea(besides assumptions, of course) of where this is story is going to end, i like that they are "healthy" insteadof super toxic and abusive, but it feel so empty and odd to me right now. Praying for the omega to grow a bigger personality, that would help a lot already!
It doesn't look bad but is different in a way that makes me forget they are the same characters. I liked the previous better, hopefully I will get used to it.
I Knew there was something wrong . I kept thinking why I don’t feel connected to the character anymore