beta
its a good story Ig but I just dont know wtf are going in their heads cause why tf would the uke be "betrayed" over finding out he has powers? and the seme "scared" because the sister told the uke his dad's situation? And a bunch of other things but I forgot since I just had this tab open for the past 2 months and I needed to delete some cuz it was getting cluttered. The ending felt a bit too fast for me because the pacing suddenly became faster and they could've definitely fleshed out or added more stuff at the end but it was still good