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2020-11-15 09:39 marked
I really want to like this buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut...
The design is good, but there is a lot of things that bother me.
For starter how used to the noble lifestyle the mc is, she excels all the noble etiquette with not problem whatsoever.
She does not really have a strong reason to get marry, "want to live peacefully" my ass, when she was literally asked by her father if she really wanted to marry, she could choose to not get involved, her father was literally willing to reject the emperor in order to make his daughter happy, she could marry anyone she wanted and have a happy peaceful life.
She does not particularly fangirls over them as a couple enough put herself at risk in order to see them develop feelings for each other like in "Miss not so sidekick" for example, I have no idea why she chooses to be a queen.
She wants them heroine and emperor to be a couple but most of her "will" to make them a couple is on her thoughts, she does little to nothing to give them moments, for starters she could easily refuse to try dresses, but she didn't.
She is TO DAMN clueless, "the emperor is telling me the love lines were meant for heroine, hmmmmm I wonder what it means", she is not written as a clueless character either, the people around her sees her as someone wise and intelligent, I would understand if she was written as dense as in "hametsu no flag" but is not the case.
She relies too much on the book, every chapter she is basically "this didn't happen in the book, hmmmm"
There other things that bother me... honestly I was hoping at least heroine and mc would be friends, or at least something like in "The Stereotypical Life of a Reincarnated Lady", but that is out of the window.
This was just a rant to take it out of my chest, this could have being much more, I kind of tired of "I won't fall in love with him >:(" for of plots when they so obviously end up together, I know the important thing is the journey to that but this journey does not convince me.
I was really hoping she could notice he is falling in love with her and then response with the "Uh, I thought this was supposed to be a loveless marriage" while grinning at him as a petty revenge for his attitude, I would live for that! Or idk, PLOT TWIST MC IS LESBIAN!, something new, something fresh.
The design is good, but there is a lot of things that bother me.
For starter how used to the noble lifestyle the mc is, she excels all the noble etiquette with not problem whatsoever.
She does not really have a strong reason to get marry, "want to live peacefully" my ass, when she was literally asked by her father if she really wanted to marry, she could choose to not get involved, her father was literally willing to reject the emperor in order to make his daughter happy, she could marry anyone she wanted and have a happy peaceful life.
She does not particularly fangirls over them as a couple enough put herself at risk in order to see them develop feelings for each other like in "Miss not so sidekick" for example, I have no idea why she chooses to be a queen.
She wants them heroine and emperor to be a couple but most of her "will" to make them a couple is on her thoughts, she does little to nothing to give them moments, for starters she could easily refuse to try dresses, but she didn't.
She is TO DAMN clueless, "the emperor is telling me the love lines were meant for heroine, hmmmmm I wonder what it means", she is not written as a clueless character either, the people around her sees her as someone wise and intelligent, I would understand if she was written as dense as in "hametsu no flag" but is not the case.
She relies too much on the book, every chapter she is basically "this didn't happen in the book, hmmmm"
There other things that bother me... honestly I was hoping at least heroine and mc would be friends, or at least something like in "The Stereotypical Life of a Reincarnated Lady", but that is out of the window.
This was just a rant to take it out of my chest, this could have being much more, I kind of tired of "I won't fall in love with him >:(" for of plots when they so obviously end up together, I know the important thing is the journey to that but this journey does not convince me.
I was really hoping she could notice he is falling in love with her and then response with the "Uh, I thought this was supposed to be a loveless marriage" while grinning at him as a petty revenge for his attitude, I would live for that! Or idk, PLOT TWIST MC IS LESBIAN!, something new, something fresh.
2020-09-16 21:59 marked
As someone who is a part of the LGBTQ+ community, I am offended. The community is about gender and sexuality, not mental health conditions. Although I personally have a fascination with Psychopaths and Sociopaths, the way you went about this is all wrong. I thought this was going to be someone asking for people not to immediately determine every Ps......
2020-05-31 16:21 marked
2020-01-23 16:03 marked
There are so many people in these comments belittling how I, as a black per...