I don't understand why the maid more interested doing nothing than to solve her own problem, our main characters didn't do the obvious thing their should do in every situations they have.
who wrote this? chat gpt?
the white haired psycho need to go, we don't want him
at first i hesitate to read it, but i give it a shot after i read the comment section with such positive feedback.
then it became boring towards the end, and THEN... i became pissed! the author decided to downgrade the bad ass male lead to mere dog loving its master (i can not see any other way especially when he call her my MASTER)
such a turn off why can't just he stay where he is being the same loving husband and not level down just to bring female lead to its level. im so disappointed
and that plot holes bugging me, what's the point bringing her childhood friend and her potential sperm donor (at least one of them is) to capital and then not using him to progress in the story?
instead we got that whatever nonsense towards ending, what a bad writing
like.. i was waiting something spicy going to happen between her and the other concubine BUT NO she only talk to them briefly and they're gone.
they just get briefly mentioned to be the bad guy few more time, and got no meaningful interaction. (how am i going tho hate them then?)
and that 3 old man rapist, author also decided briefly pointed it out and DIPPED. like why? why bring them out and do nothing afterwards?
(what am i going to do with the suspense that i feel now?)
and that male village boy I also think something gonna happen now that he also in the capital, BUT NO nothing happens.
not even interaction with female lead, WHAT'S THE POINT?
as if the female lead is forbid having anymore hardship and dodging every bullet possible that comes towards her.
what a wasted opportunity
the only thing I've been thinking since i begin reading this is how typical ending of this kind of genre.
like they already been married and doing it since begining and they'll not going to have kids until everything is solved.
as if having kids is the mark of their happily ever after, no more drama, no more problem. as if
idk about you BUT what purpose an adult holding their sword to 10yo and then continue to talk to himself?
like what for?
i know stuff like this would bother me that's why im not going to read this one, i bet a lot of unnecessary things as this would scattered throughout the story. smh
im only on chapter 5 but i have something to say.
WHY CUT HIS HAIR?
he is FINE with that long hair, DAYUM!
while reading this, all i can think of what kind of broke hunter didn't hunt? how can she afford to live?
like I've read 18 chapter so far she only work's once, at the beginning of this chapter.
as soon as the story start she going in to side missions as if she didn't have any life at all.
it's not realistic if you ask me.
so, for the longest time i feel ashamed that i only read yaoi. i tried to change pace and read shoujo for couple months now, you have no idea how hard im tryin to find a good read flipping though so many list. here i am just click random yaoi and i am enjoying it
the arts, the story, the dialogue. the quality it's way better than mind numbing shoujo genres.
i will no longer be shame reading this
The story is just beautiful, the art too. Nothing to be ashamed of. Omg i love them sm (▰˘◡˘▰)
If you want to try some good shoujo, those may take tour interest:
- My in-law are obcess with me
- The Broken Ring : This Marriage Will Fail Anyway
- Secret Lady
- Sword of the Falcon
- I Stan the Prince
- The Tainted Half
- Like A Wind On A Dry Branch
hi.. thank you for your recommendation but i already read most of it, except the last one. i still waiting for the right headspace based on my self note the story kind of depressing.