The Colorful Language

arts is beautiful but the story... is not

i get the idea BUT it could be so much better if someone professional re write it.

at first she said she can read (that's why she knew where to go to find the bad guy house) * i know its just an excuse but still the conclusion is she CAN READ

then fast forward she got the letter with her new name in it suddenly she CAN'T READ? asking the butler to read it and acting all cute and stuff.. and everyone (means the supposed dark father something) is okay with it?

didn't she supposed to remember her past life? the one life she reads the book about?

okay lets just say the letter is different but bitch you supposed to understand how to read, i cant find her reliable as a narrator.

anddd that's past life is just another lousy attempt to pity her, i didnt buy it.


damn it im too far gone, peace (⊙…⊙ )