Iryz want to read (All 246)
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It's a good story but the uke didn't make sense most of the time, some dialogues were forced and the drama too.
I think the same story could have been constructed differently.
The scene when Taiga was a child should have been one of the clossing scenes, because when it was placed it was entirely diminished by Kei's stupid argument of "I don't know which one is the real you" like dude.... And Kei only wanting to reach once he's sure Taiga is putting some distance, nah not quite my type of story. Timings are waaaaay off.
Absolutely agree with you. The story had solid potential, but the execution—especially with the uke—felt all over the place. Some dialogues really did feel like they were trying too hard to sound deep, but ended up just... awkward. And yes, that childhood flashback scene with Taiga had so much emotional weight, it could’ve been a powerful closing moment. But nope, it got overshadowed by Kei’s confusing “identity crisis” speech. Like, bro, what are you even saying? And the way he only chases after Taiga when he senses he’s slipping away? Super off-putting. The timing and emotional pacing just didn’t land right for me either.
Yup, we're on the same page here, everything you felt I felt it too the same way.
It does have a lot of potential as you said, it's a pity it was constructed this way, it almost seemed it didn't go through an editor or something.
Seriously? Conflict after conflict after conflict is not entertaining. There should already been an arc of Kouichi and Kaius about anything, but about them. I hate how the author is just throwing crumbs by placing one sex scene between them every other chapter. It doesn't even feel necessary, just like a consolation pill she's giving us because that's what this manga supposed to be about; the main couple, not all of those political conflicts that the majority make no sense.
it was clear since the beginning that the prince summoned koichi to be able to ascend to the throne and such thing is in fact political. There's plenty of other manga/manhwa that provide smut with no plot if u want that
If you read "I want smut" from my comment, you need to read it again.
I want the story to be ABOUT THE MAIN COUPLE not this senseless political struggle that's been dragging for too long.
and on the contrary, I said I DON'T WANT THE SEX SCENES THE AUTHOR IS GIVING, like CONSOLATION PILLS. Did you read that? Or you just read what you wanted to read?