the pacing is dog shit. theres no mystery or tension. everything is resolved in the next chapter. its revealed that the mc's father forced him to fight the devour nachal and none of his teammates give a fuck??? lmaoo. they don't even acknowledge how fucked up that is and just move on. this story would be so good if it just took its time. why tf am I even learning about the truth about the devour nachal rn. why can't I learn about it later in a big battle reveal? even the action feels fast. each nachal power the MC acquires should feel significant so we can understand the weight of his power and and the potential risk he might face and what it means for the story going forward. instead I never feel like he'll ever lose a fight. every time he gets hurt ik he'll win and get a new power. where's the conflict? it feels like instead of making this into multiple fleshed out arcs the author is trying to race to the finish line. there is one caveat and that is that the art is absolutely gorgeous very beautiful characters and designs. its a shame
You are so right. This story is like fast food. Everything is designed to advance as soon as possible and in a straight forward manner. I could never get fully invested in the story because things would resolved before I could truly care or ruminate. Plus the power creep was insane. Why are we fighting level 10s by chap 20??? They're already facing boss level threats by the end of the season so what does that leave for next season?
Which is a damn shame because the characters are endearing and the designs are fantastic. As it stands the story is being carried by its gorgeous art, hot characters, and maru fanatics. But there's a lot of potential here so I'll tune in for season 2. Hopefully the author tightens up their story telling in the meantime.
The artist absolutely smash at drawing bl, josei, or one of those guide verse stories. People would eat that up (I'm people).
i haven’t seen such an unlikeable ML is in a hot minute.
who sniffs crotch after a trauma bonding session wtf
Help I laughed and snorted after reading this comment
LOL don't you like it when you're just casually conversing about your trauma then suddenly someone's smelling your crotch? Like bruh chill lemme have my moment first
ian ryu
and this is why you should never mess with DL guys
I came here because of your comment, whats dl?
DL means “down low”. it refers to closeted men who present themselves as “straight” while pursuing homosexual relationships on the “down low”. aka sneakily, because these men are typically husbands or boyfriends. now, the ML doesn’t have a significant other but he is presenting a lot of the same troubling behavior. it’s important for me to point out that DL men, more often than not, have no intention in coming out the closet. whether it be because of their internalized homophobia, fear, or sheer negligence these men have no intentions in being in healthy queer relationships or not cheating on their current partners. they want both and that’s what makes them so toxic because they’re abusive on both ends.
Ohh, so do you recommend reading this or not?
it’s not as egregious as some other BLs or nearly as violent but i imagine we’re in for a really annoying arc filled with necessary but frustrating drama rn. either way, i say try it because i do actually like the MC as a character and find him to be refreshing. i also like his relationship with his friends as well :)
ugh you freak get off the floor this is a respectable establishment ew ☹
ass eating for damn near an hour is crazy
a real muncher fr