Bruh I'm about to throw hands at Yawhi. Jooin tells Yawhi countless times that he never listens to him, and again in this latest chapter, yet what does Yawhi do? kisses Jooin without his consent. I don't really ship either with Jooin at this point (I think we still need to know more about Cain before I can even have a formal opinion), but as of right now, Yawhi is making Cain look like an amazing option.
It's very cute, and I usually love stories with around 20 chapters, but this is one of those stories that needed more chapters to develop the plot. I read in a previous reply that this was for a school project, but if given the chance, this would have been amazing as a 30-50 chapter story. Like we never saw Chess during the first few days of moving in (ngl I was low-key confused if he did move in at first), and how it affected both Ben and Chess. Also, all we ever saw was Ben push Chess away. We never really saw them develop actual feelings towards each other. Like it would have been cute if we saw them eating meals together or watching TV, just to show them actually spending time together. I felt like they were never around each other, and the few times they were, Ben was telling him to leave him be. Anyways, my overall point is that I wish this was longer and a bit more developed because it was very cute, but a bit too short,
I really love this story, but I wish Jaerim's trauma/feelings were talked about more (with the bullying, rape, etc). I felt like it should have mentioned in the end at some point. Also, I wish the author didn't add the extra 3 couples because it felt out of place a bit. They made sense when first introduced, but they were never mentioned again really so it didn't make much sense afterwards. Still an amazing story, though.
Even at the beginning, the story felt rushed. I wish we actually saw the resolve between MC and ML. I also wish we got to see more of the second (potential) couple. Overall, it had a great concept and was not a bad story, I just wish we saw more into that story.
Also, I've read some of the comments. Although most people might not pay, Lezhin and most webtoon sites don't have comment sections, so some payers come here to write about their thoughts.
PLEASE THIS WAS SO FUNNY
I started reading this before my class, and at chapter 8 when yk he turns back to the stone, I had to pause because I genuinely could not stop laughing. I kept giggling to myself in class and on my way home from school. And then it kept getting better in the next few chapters too lmfaooo
Gurrrl u are brave. I’m not taking any chances