
Plot is good but I still dislike Horus and his egocentric "kindness" he just does whatever he wants with Seth pretending be kind but doesn't really respect Seth bc if he appreciates and respects him he would respect his words (and boundaries. When no is no!) would value his strong and have trust in it even if he feels worried ( ̄へ ̄)

BRO I LOVE THE TOP HE'S THE BEST BOYFRIEND OF ALL TIME BUT BLACK HAIRED GUY IS SO ANNOYING LIKE HE'S SO AN ASSHOLE BITCH

I kinda disagree on his black haired being an asshole. Sure the boyfriend is a green flag and everything and communicating for love, but also black haired loves him very much too and is just exploring his fetish, and also staying loyal and being with only him and you start to see black haired just loves him to do it NOT anyone else. You can see he gets the ring anyway and is also putting him effort, there's communication and black haired just doesn't know what he wants a lot of the time and just needs to work on that a bit, but he's not an asshole, in fiction, an asshole is WAY worse than that lol, I found this to be a cute reading <3
Did he really will betray his own brother who destroy his own back to pay THEIR debt OVER A GUY (╯°Д °)╯╧╧