Yeah, this is dragging for to long. I feel like the author didn't know how to start their relationship and is just writing their story to finish it. And it still seems like he has no actual feelings for her, only the desire to have a relationship like his parents & have someone forever attached at the hip. That's not love at all and in cliche fashion he's probably gonna realize his feelings at the last minute & say he always had feelings for her :( it just disappoints me. Should of just kept it family oriented, every happy ending doesn't have to be based on getting married.
Yup. The author simply can't write the scenario of Ein actually fall in love.
I despise their beginning and the seme is shit. But why did the author have to make it my favorite pairing, cop x criminal, along with the art and adorable uke I'm conflicted.
I love the conflict she has with her mother. On one side, she detests the mother, who made her friends/loved ones & others lives so miserable. And on the other hand, she has the normal feelings of "but their my family," unable to fully hate the actions her mother took in order to ensure her safety in the future. I love this conflict over others I've seen that have the characters' moral compass somehow higher than their love for their family/lovers. As ppl hide bodies, commit atrocities for the people they slightly love. So I always found it off in a story where the character is ready to turn in their family because they know what their doing is wrong or it's the right thing to do.
I really wanted to like this story but I found myself skipping pages after a few chapters. And personally I'm kinda over stories where they try and avoid a title/power but still get manipulated into doing it, it's kinda like how people hate when stories are the opposite of the title like in isekai or romance stories, now I kinda understand their annoyance with it.
In the beginning it feels off putting how many times they mention they look like father-daughter. However, besides that & her obvious look it was actually a cute-bittersweet story. Kinda wish it was longer to see how the brother fared in hell, their family life, and them (mainly him) growing old together.
This is probably the first time I've seen the ml pull a fl with the "I knew it you never really loved me" all to just push their buttons so they reveal their feelings or hold onto them. Its hilarious as I usually see fl pull that stunt. it's manipulation at its finest, but I'm still here for it.
The true villains are the royal family and for that reason I can' never wish happiness for the prince & saintess, as it all came at the price of the ml. They forced him to go to war, even had the fl convince him, they win but are just as scared of him and care more about the nobles trust then the man they sent out to battle. If the fl hadnt tried to change him they would of surely tried to kill him even though they forced the title of hero & expectations onto him. Yeah, this whole story is basically trying to convince the audience that the yandere ml is the crazy one and not the numerous ppl taking advantage of him & only seeing him as a tool/character. I rest my case this story is overall horrible writing with bad execution. As fr how is it that the crazy yandere ml the is the most sane & true to his feelings there, all while the story is making him out as worst one.
This is the first time I find the main couple 100% better then the side couple. Usually I like both but the way the second couple got to together just feels like "fine, I'll doing it" I wished the 2nd couple execution was better.
I actually can't remember the 2nd couple. It's not ringing any bells even after reading this chapter
This is basically a generic yaoi with good art. From comments and edits i thought this would be a good story but I was surely mistaken. Has the weak uke that gets sexuall assaulted like nothing, no punishment for the assualter as usual, and don't forget having sex after almost being assault. I'm sorry, but yall overhyped this story and got my hopes up fr. And the funny thing is other stories get hate for doing stuff like this but art trumps everything is what I noticed.
I was literally so disappointed when I saw the comment section thinking it was cute and all and my smile just dropped from these comments..
I was also surprised & disheartened by the comments and angry at the story b/c i spent my morning reading it for nothing
I really hate the sister and how the story still tries to make out what she did as a Saint. She literally stole, forced labor in order to get food, and had money that she didn't work for but donated her sisters. She's honestly a horrible person and trying to make it seem like we'll she did feed the orphans and help others. That is literally manipulation and tactics real abusers use. I'm sticking around for the knight & her seeing ghost, but the sister does not deserve redemption, punishment seems to never exist in this story. Like girl you almost got trafficked b/c your sister owned money but yep she's definitely a good person.
in the end she cried and said she want to see their mom and dad like the sister tho..
i feel you, but hey, this is shojo manga, it's just like typical troupe lol ╮(￣▽￣)╭
I’m pretty certain the narrative is that she’s a villain so I don’t really understand this post
i mean i thought she was a villain too, after read this until chapter 6, the sister not really evil
I also read up and she is a villain, just not with the intentions to be one. That's still horrible actions and manipulating ppl. Even villains in other stoires act the same way, so I don't know how that make her actions acceptable.
She's not, on other sites is updated and (spoiler) basically she's forgiven and the sister gets taken as the saintess. Her actions were basically looked at as a naive girl who didn't know she was hurting ppl. Even though she did horrible things and manipulated ppl. She's basically not a villian but has villian tendencies.
oohh i got what you see
Thank you for see my point of view, I agree with you she's not a villian, but I'm mainly mad she didn't get at least yelled at, instead she was just easily forgiven.
I agree with you!!! at leaset she should be slapped
*least
If you cause so much suffering you're still a villain even if that wasn't your intention. It's just like if you choose to drink drive and there's a crash and people die, you are the villain in that victim's life even though you weren't planning to be a killer you just weren't thinking about how your actions could hurt others. But not meaning to hurt others doesn't change that you did, and that people have a right to be upset with you or even view your personality poorly because of the results even if that wasn't your goal. She's been forgiven and gets better, but she still was the villain of this story.
That's what I've been saying she still did some vile stuff but sadly to the author she isnt the villain of this story, more just an evil side character and all is forgiven.