Alright I think I’m confused on this whole tiger thing. Let me see if I have this right:
So there are people that are slaves tigers that are apparently relatives of the uke’s fam. The tiger can eat regular food but needs to eat the slave’s soul for some reason. The tiger can mind control their targets to an extent where they can make them do things and forget but they can’t make them change their emotions??? The tiger can also eat the soul in exchange for a wish that makes it so the soul doesn’t need to be happy to be eaten. Brother is dead because the tiger said he ate his soul. Ngl this is sus cus eaten people don’t come back to choke others.
Question time: Why is the brother dead, from decay especially? Also with that question why is the uke even nominated in this tiger eating. Didn’t they say that in order to flee the tiger they sacrificed other relatives souls? Then why didn’t the cycle stop with the eaten brother? Why can’t the guy just mind control the uke into experiencing happy emotions to eat him right then and there? Also the seme says he needs to make uke happy to fully eat his soul then why do they need to have sex all the time? Does doing it stop his hunger pangs for a while or something?
Some of these are probably answered later but for any anyone can answer, please help me cus I’m kind of confused. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
Okay even ignoring the rape in the 1st chapter, why was this such a train wreck of a story? XD
1. Okay, I know the mangaka needed a reason for him to be a dominatrix but wow did his brother never even attempt to see what his new job was? Also why was he even going into a hotel building with this guy if they apparently have a company building that had body guards already???
2. Too many characters know things they shouldn’t. Ignoring the fact that they’re not allowed to do non con sex which means that his virginity should have been safe anyway and he was entitled to limiting his service to what he does now, how tf did these people know he doesn’t have it now?? Even if he’s acting a little different, there’s no reason for them to assume his cherry is popped. For all they know, his dog could have died or something that’s making him distracted. Also why did the seme know the problem was with his f*KC buddy?
3. Seme sucks. Out of all the unnecessary knowledge you could have had characters make, why didn’t you make it that he just watched some gay p*rn and is good at imitating? Now the seme is a hark and a hypocrite instead of just being a jerk. Also the uke got so much anxiety by the seme calling him a sl*t (not sure why ngl) but damn they swept that under the rug so fast.
4. Why did he just let those guys go??? Th why should be crucified on a stick
5. Oh wow, the fairytail everything is magically alright ending...So I thought he quit college to support his brother through high school and college and that’s why he wanted the job but nope, lol, he thought this was the way to get him to stop loving his brother, okay. So now his brother is magically full scholarship and has a job which allows him to go back to college and he proposes. I’ve seen kid’s TV shows with more realistic endings then that. Such a Cop-out.
All in all, pacing sucked, seme sucked, plot makes not a lot of sense in a not ignorable way. Would be if it didn’t feel so much like plot armor as opposed to other yaoi who are much subtler. Feels like the mangaka had a beginning and end and stumbled to make points to connect the two. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
I love this story but ngl it’s so weird seeing them so young yet everyone seems to treat them like adults. ( ̄∇ ̄") These boys got a lot of intense feelings for kids at like 10 years old. Because the ML is so young, they look less like kids playing marriage and more like siblings with the younger brother who’s taken care of by of his older sister.