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Honestly i feel so betrayed by that one very avoidable scene, I have no clue what the author was thinking including a r@pe scene and then just brushing over it??
Like didn’t the Divine Doctor mention another way??? I know she said it was impossible but seriously with the MC having Nano there ain’t no way that he wouldn’t have been able to do it, after all, he makes the impossible possible so I don’t understand why the author went with this route of all things.
I still want to find out about the Six Blade School so i’m mentally re-writing the scene, because I feel like it could have gone as follows:
Cheon Yeo-Weon was hesitant to take the route that the Divine Doctor (DD) said was the ‘only’ solution, after all, was there not another way that the Doctor mentioned? He was aware that Moon Gyu was okay with him doing this, but it felt wrong not only did it feel like a betrayal to Moon Gyu, but also to his vow of only taking one lover, plus taking a women who was in pain and unconscious did not sit well with him.
‘There has to be another way, can you find a way Nano?’
Nano’s mechanical voice grated in Yeo-Weons brain.
“There is a way Master.”
‘Tell me.’
Nano began to describe the process of blood transfusion, citing that the medical technique could be repurposed for Qi circulation. Chen Yeo-Weon asked for Nano to transfer the information.
“I will treat your daughter”
The father of the woman (i forgot their names), pressed his palm and fist together, bowing in thanks. Out of the corner of Yeo-Weon’s eyes Moon Gyu’s face dropped slightly, but soon recovered know she had given him permission. Sending a telepathic message to Moon Gyu, her face lit up and she gave him a small smile.
‘I know you can do it’
- and then the next scene would basically be the MC exposing the woman's stomach and placing his hands in the appropriate places to avoid her from dying from Qi overload or whatever, and above where her – uterus would be, and asks Nano to help him hone in his Qi to reach the pressure point (?) and then the next scene he is busy circulating his Yang energy into her while extracting her excess Yin energy with the goal of creating balance within her and then the rest of the scene goes as it does in the manhwa, (and so it can be a bit more of a point of tension where he’s trying to circulate the Qi or energies properly that he can review later/ also nearly go with Qi deviation and thus has not only a layer of realisation from this circulation technique but also better knowledge of how to balance Yin and Yang energy in himself but ALSO in others which could come up later in the plot or something?? and maybe with like body strengthening techniques as well so it still follows that plot point after THAT scene)
with a bit at the end where Heo Bong or something mentions it as like a wink wink thing OR the father when she is on the bed and he mentions marriage because they ‘slept together’ in which she’s like “Wtf are you taking about, we did jack shit” and some how the DD hears about this and is like “how the fuck did he achieve that??” and then that can be another scene altogether and maybe in turn she reaches some sort of enlightenment when the MC details what he did back to her or somethin.