This could have been 10 chapters at the LEAST. Explain about Owen’s past lover in more detail. Give us some more backstory on how he’s connected to the guy with the Italian name I can’t write. How did Owen become a vampire? These could have all been ways to lengthen the story, even just a bit. I really enjoy the premise, since I ADORE vampires, and the author’s art, but the fact that the story is so short is just very disappointing to me.
GO GET YO MANS YUYANG