
Well story asides but all that s*x with no foreplay and other times with a torn butt?
Maybe the author should really experience it themselves and see if they love it or not before apply it to their characters. This is actually inhuman and fcking stupid. Retarded author!!
"I like him/love so much" oh please stop kidding yourself
The expressions on the characters face was badly done. Not the skill but the feel. Trashy story, too.
This had me thinking the people who made this must really hate human.