It was good. The car incident was pretty hilarious, if ya know which part i am taking about. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
. . .Cute, and the art was pretty good. But it is in raw, so i have no idea what they were saying to each other? Oh well.#-.-)
Nice story, liked how it was going. . . I liked how it ended, but i also did not like how it ended- just when it was really getting to the good point.
That was hot, loved it, the art and story was really good. Hope there will be more?
Loved it! Really good story. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
Awwww- nooo- don't end!! More please! ^_- Poor Garai, for what he had to do, and having to kill- or seal, the one he loved- Raki, to stop an evil force. . .
Such a beautiful story!(▰˘◡˘▰)
Nice one Jun- little punk. lol
Good story, but i think it would have been even better if it was longer. Too short.
Pretty god read, is there going to be more to it?
It was good. The car incident was pretty hilarious, if ya know which part i am taking about. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭