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Was this written by a wattpad creator or what?? Several instances am I cringing due to the number of times she falls and contradicts herself. " yea I rejected him, but that doesn't mean he should ignore me," girl, just shut up. Also, what is up with her and her "unique clumsiness"? Insane! Currently, I'm in chapter 15, and there has been no mention of anything her ex did that could have traumatized her that bad. The only mention is the "break up scene," but even then, he really just said some mean things and broke off their relationship. For example, if you don't show instances in where the ex is abusive or harming the MC (whether physical or emotional), this scene doesn't really give a punch. Making her trauma seem unreasonable. If they put different flashbacks of her time with her ex, where he was emotionally abusive, her constant nightmares would make sense. Really gives wattpad vibes due to the cliches.
It was decent in the beginning but then it just plummets bit by bit.