A very short list of the esper x guide trope.
Really hope more will show up in the future :’)
I love it but I so thought he was a gangster runaway or a killer hahaha (worried the grandma might have been dead inside the house).glad this is just a silly smutty read hahaha (▰˘◡˘▰)
But I think the plot was less convoluted before the time skip coma thing. Completely isolated everyone or killed them off seemed like pointless drama
The whole rape and forced biting was devastating for me, his constantly crying no but instincts begging for it. The beta realizing what happened. The rejection after from his body even though they both wanted it.
I know they said they hadn't had sex for 2 years after that first time for his body, I assume it still rejects the beta. So fucking devastating. And the marking doesn't even help control his heat? Damn what was the point then??!? (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
Maybe I didn't read very well but I still don't understand how he fell in love with asusa?! Like he has his daddy trauma but he seemed to hate him and then one being yelled at by his friends and an abandonment by asusa later and he's desperate for him? It just felt kinda weird and rushed maybe? Ehh idk
"I'll never do anything you hate ♡♡♡"
Proceeded by literally doing so many things the bottom hated like???? Hahahahaha good old yaoi logic right there
It just feels like a lot of plots these days aim at just being "painful"
Sure there is a storyline and I'll read it, but I'm kinda tired of 'top treats bottom like he's trying to torture him into love... and then it works." It does what it's trying to do, maybe this plot has become too much for me recently idk
The story itself was interesting and the Characters held my attention. I think it was just too short to tell the story it wanted to. But we have the extras to look forward too, so I do hope we get more info on Nolan in the new agency. I was also hoping to see some actual discussion on any lingering mental effects from all of Zeus's torture and gaslighting cause I think we see it a bit in Nolan's personality during this but it felt mostly overlooked hahaha