They are so wholesome. I've been reading yaoi/BL for a looooong time and I don't think I've ever read something that is this loving. In the words of our lord and savior Hozier:" my baby's sweet as can be, [s]he gives me toothaches just from kissing me" :')
I just noticed the bottom teeth... It's like there is only one long tooth at the right side and on the left side there is the tounge which doesn't make sense
What sloppy, clumsy writing. Truly one of the biggest fumbles of a story I've ever seen